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WIP-lemon zest_school_spirit!

WIP WIP WIP!! WORK IN PROGRESS!!!

Hi guys!! here is the WIP of the next drawing, and it will be for our beloved Lemon Zest, the girl who only had 2 lines of dialogue in the entire Friendship Games movie!! X'D.. But hey, that doesn't mean that she's not a pretty girl who deserves her drawing too... so, here is her turn!!

Here you are looking at two different poses for her. It will be a full body, so don't worry, but the point is: In lineart 1), Lemon is in a "half-turn-over", the pose is correct and my base was the "Body Chan" model that I use to these cases (it is a figure that work for that, the poses hehe), for that reason, her right arm looks like this. But I also understand that maybe, although the pose is correct, it's not very pleasing to the eye, that is why I also did the pose 2), which is basically the same, but with her right arm in a more standard position, I don 't know if you understand me XD.

Which one do you like the most? 1), 2) or both look good to you? :O ... please remember that this is a WIP, i mean, it's still a WORK IN PROGRESS :).

I hope you like the final pic guys! ^-^

PS: Also remember that Sunset and Applejack's files (my little maid) are now available in your email! :D


WIP-lemon zest_school_spirit!

Comments

thanks Petardo! :D .. hmm, maybe I'll do the two versions at the end. I think that in these moments of difficult decision, it is better to play it safe, and draw the two versions XD, I mean, that's the best in these cases :3 ^-^

charlieXe

I honestly don't mind the first pose at all, as it looks more dynamic than the second. Perhaps it would be even better if you draw her also taking a skirt edge with that hand, so as to make her appear more playful. = ^ ω ° =

Petardo238

check your message pls! ^-^

charlieXe

hahah of course! XD

charlieXe

Any chance to get the past pictures as well? Maybe on Gumroad?

unclefester84

Also pose 1 looks better IMO

Was expecting something more enticing to match the Sunny Flare and Sugarcoat pieces, but this looks pretty cute so far.

The pose doesn't matter, as long as she'll keep that smirk 8)

FramedPixelStudio

Many thanks Colonist!! and that's right!! The idea of ​​this drawing is for Lemon to show us her outfit, that's why I drew her in a half-turn-over, and the correct arm pose in this case would be that ^^

charlieXe

thanks man!! ^^

charlieXe

Both look good to me, but I’m personally leaning toward number 1 since it looks like Zest’s more openly showing off her outfit.

Colonist

Look at that Cutie!

Sour Power

thanks Awkward! :D .. Although the pose is correct, some users may think that her right arm is broken in the lineart 1) haha :P, that's why I wanted to do these two versions and know what you think ^^

charlieXe

When I worked on this lineart and modeling of the "body chan" figure, it looks good and perfect to me ... but it's true that for some users, it might seem like her arm is broken or something like that xD... I made these two versions to be sure ^^. Thank you very much Barricade!

charlieXe

exacly! Something similar happened to me with Juniper's drawing, and I don't want to make the same mistake twice XD .. Your opinion is very important to me! Thanks bro!! :D

charlieXe

I think pose 1 looks better. Edit: They both look good though!

Awkward Segway

Pose 1, I think. Looks better to me.

BarricadeSkywalker

I personally like pose 1. It looks fine to me. Don't know about others, though. You are right though, in general what IS right doesn't matter as much as what LOOKS right, which can trip you up. XD

Stellarator

she is a magnificent girl! and the personal reason is that she likes music, like me!! haha XD

charlieXe

aww yeah!! jajaja XD

charlieXe

Lemon Zest, my favorite cute looking Shadowbolt member. ^^

KevinHz19

Hell yeah! 😍🥰

Shine Racer


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