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The Heart Grows Ch. 154

Cleaning up, dealing with the rest of Far Reach's mess, and grave decisions.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rYn5hRl5eCkWCk3u-69gFKOG6hpQNwFEmwaFC7OrFMM/

The Heart Grows Ch. 154

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Oh, trust me, Ripper is about to get a star role. That would have been a fun one to go with, though.

Damaged

The messenger that she unhorses should be dealt with by her asking her wyvern to silence him immediately after she compels the horses. Assuming the wyvern is following the pattern of her other companions, it should be circling directly above her present position just higher out of sight or maybe visible just as a bird to keen eyes. Adding the wyvern dipping down to visibly fly over her on the way to do her bidding or becoming just visible enough to be easily spotted by the crowd when roaring on the way out would become another display of her power integration. Or maybe the wyvern flies directly over her head since it's resting on the roof while she recovered? Also it brings in her last friend that's remained largely unmentioned whereas the other 3 show possessive closeness and protection that the wyvern should be part of. Or the wyvern having joined them in the room before she wakes, curled around the pair, walking with them to the address, then taking off from her side to deal with the messenger works too but is a less impressively subtle and shocking display of additional power.

Raven

Someone gave her the idea that she can make her own decisions. Who'd do a crazy thing like that? (:

Damaged

In which Elanor sets them straight.

Andrew Denton


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