The Direction of the Main Comic
Added 2025-07-18 01:46:28 +0000 UTCSo, I have been thinking about how the comic has gone, and I want to ask you guys your input.
I am wondering if you guys would like the comic to go my intended way and follow Mikel (The actual main character of this book) or would you guys like to have it out of order and follow Austin and Jayden instead. I currently already have the first few pages of Mikel's journey planned. Austin and Jayden will return, if you decide to have Mikel's story be told, but they will show up in the chronological order they are supposed to. With the proper lead up that is intended.
But if you guys would like me to instead continue Austin and Jayden's story to completion then I can do that as well as the order of events don't really matter. It is more along the lines of what you guys would like to see more. I know Austin and Jayden's story ended on quite the cliffhanger and that is also intended, but I am also aware that it's confusing to just jump to Mikel's story right after.
So either you trust my process of telling Mikel's story or you REALLY want to see Austin more and understand the cliffhanger some more.
Mikel and Austin are connected. Darrell is also Austin's uncle. Mikel and Darrell are also connected. I won't say how or why. But trust me when I say that either way the story is the same, just the impact of the moment changes a little.
So, I will leave it up to you guys. Tell me, which way you'd like the story to go.
A) The original intended story of Mikel and Germ first.
B) Have the story out of chronological order, continue with Austin's tale, then jump back to Mikel to explain why.
Comments
I have been posting continuations of the comic. I just posted the sketch for page 4 of chapter 1. I also have the entire first two pages of the comic in video format with also filler videos posted. I have also been working on a side chapter which delves deeper into the world building aspect of the comic about a football team. I also am currently working on a VN style game to go along side all of this with patrons. All of this stuff has been posted under the tag Skin, Skin:TSC, The Office of Eyes, Link to the first two pages in video format fully voice acted: https://youtu.be/16e5an5L8lU Link to the filler video for the comic which was to hype up the comic of chapter 1: https://youtu.be/KZdnEn_EBtk Link to page 3 of chapter 1: https://www.patreon.com/posts/skin-ch-1-pg-3-75297190 Link to the sketch of page 4: https://www.patreon.com/posts/skin-chapter-1-4-133642740 Link to page 9 of chapter -1 which I just posted recently: https://www.patreon.com/posts/skin-ch-1-page-9-133868620 Link to the entire comic thus far excluding the newest comic page of chapter -1: https://www.patreon.com/posts/skin-chapter-0-1-56844605 Are you implying I am not working on the comic at all or something?
Nicholas Thorpes
2025-07-19 07:23:10 +0000 UTCI'm a bit confused, are you actually making the comic and posting it somewhere? I haven't seen anything on here beyond the sex scene chapter 0 you posted here a few years ago and your recent updates to it.
Zelig Wiegand
2025-07-18 23:31:31 +0000 UTCStay the course. The cliffhanger makes a great hook
Joarvan
2025-07-18 02:51:58 +0000 UTC
