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Only one chance (P.13) SKETCH

Only one chance (P.13) SKETCH

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You have nothing to apologize for) I myself may be missing some details.

ManFromEarth

Ah, I thought it might be something like that, sounds like fun! Apologies then, and good luck with the perspective!

Dargon

Thank you. For this slide, I want to use the DoF effect. Simulating a first-person view.

ManFromEarth

Whether that's a loving caress or a forceful pull, loving the hands on the face. The hair in the second panel is lovely too! However, the ratio of forearm width to wrist width seems a little extreme for the left arm in the third panel. Apologies if you're going for something specific and no worries if you've already started animating, just wanted to check with ya!

Dargon


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