bitch ten??
Added 2023-04-05 00:15:20 +0000 UTChey mates, i hope you like how this is going. i'm trying a more comic style than the Overwatch Comic. Also i think this might have less in terms of shading and more in lineart and colors, i hope this looks good after what i have in mind.
anyways, reading your comments!
Comments
Nah man, I'm just happy I can support ya, keep up the amazing hot art!!
The Big_Red_Machine
2023-04-05 11:45:39 +0000 UTCi'll fix that problem! thank you for telling me, friend
2023-04-05 11:33:31 +0000 UTCI love this art and style you bringing to these characters and right from the start you setting up this hot new dynamic/take which is sweet but I have to be critical about one thing and it is the lay out of the comic It took a bit of time to get the flow of how the story goes cause i wasn't sure what panel to start from; like I couldn't determine whether this was a regular comic page (reading from left to right) or a manga page (reading from right to left). Cause the first panel is bitch Ben n femboy Gwen on the right, then Grandma with the worms with the worms on the left but then on the bottom panel it goes from left to right with the dialogue/flow. If you wanna do it this way I suggest putting down arrows to help know where to start and go from there or figure out more in the paneling layout how u want the story to flow Just my take, apologies if i'm being too much on it but i just had to say what i saw, still love and want you to continue on this :D
The Big_Red_Machine
2023-04-05 06:28:01 +0000 UTCLove it can't wait for part 2. I was also wondering when you'd continue your gravity falls story
Vince Xanders
2023-04-05 05:37:21 +0000 UTCI love this your art si ameizing
2023-04-05 03:03:30 +0000 UTCNow that you say that it sounds familiar but it's been so very long since I last watched
MapleLafayette
2023-04-05 02:04:06 +0000 UTCoh no no, in the first Ben10 chapter, grandpa Max makes them eat worms, so i used that
2023-04-05 02:03:10 +0000 UTCYes agree this new method is great
MyDude
2023-04-05 00:40:11 +0000 UTCSame lol
Jason Perez
2023-04-05 00:25:02 +0000 UTCYee the comic method is great for telling stories, also I thought those were bowls of stringy cum at first XD
MapleLafayette
2023-04-05 00:20:19 +0000 UTCI immediately love this and want a entire series of it
Jason Perez
2023-04-05 00:18:22 +0000 UTC
