Current Proposal for New Artwork
Added 2025-01-13 02:18:39 +0000 UTCAs I believe I've mentioned before, I've been working on getting artwork for a future book 1 on Amazon. What do you guys think about the proposal I'm about to pay for to have fully created?
Comments
Mila does use some guns still (mostly sniper rifle though, although she used twin pistols form of her earing when they landed on the invasion planet after the tutorial quite a bit but yeah, I agree this snapshot of the tutorial round doesn't feel indicative of the first half of the book, just of the tutorial
nugitoBambino
2025-01-13 03:18:16 +0000 UTChmm yeah the three white dashes near Aalam's head symbolizing confusion feels off too. Aalam is represented as being fully in his element when crafting and this feels more like a novice playing around. I also generally agree on @Leaored's comment - looks pretty awesome otherwise, but I'm not sure it really feels representative of SotSK as a whole. Is book 1 still where you originally noted the split between arc's 1 and 2, or is did you decide to break it into smaller books with the first one being in the tutorial (which would make this be a lot more representative of that arc)
nugitoBambino
2025-01-13 03:16:43 +0000 UTCWhile I think it looks nice it really doesn't reflect the shadow of the soul king well. 1st point - they look completely human, unless you say this happened entirely inside the tutorial there is no reason as to why they look like that since they become incubus/sucubbus. 2nd - I don't remember Mila using a gun after dying 3rd - Aalam's alchemy looks too generic and makes no sense. 4th - In my opinion the one you use as a thumbnail is much better.
Leaored
2025-01-13 02:48:41 +0000 UTC
