A (high-heeled) journey to the unknown - Part 26 (final)
Added 2023-10-19 07:54:27 +0000 UTCHere it is, guys, the end of "Journey"... finally! It's not my best work, but I like the ambiguity of the ending. As I said before, I've been working on panel stories for so long that the format has become repetitive and predictable. I'm happy to focus on comics for the time being! In any case, I hope you guys enjoy it! :)
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The most important part for me is that this was a beautiful, subtle visual transformation that I'm currently lapping up again in the PDF π. I like the writing a little better in Aphrodite's Mirror, but that's been your more major, long term release for awhile, so it's expected that AM would have a more complex story, more subtle character arcs, etc. Journey is amazing for the relatively shorter, linear sequence that it is, and I'm grateful for it. So, was Ms. Sani's tea some kind of potion? Did some witchcraft compel Aisha to accept her path when Aunt Zainab basically asked her if she wanted out?
SheilaSecrets
2023-10-24 01:24:11 +0000 UTCJust posted it! :)
Melissa N.
2023-10-23 04:03:08 +0000 UTCWill there be a pdf version of the whole story?
J
2023-10-21 06:40:31 +0000 UTCAlso thank you so much for finishing even though the format no longer inspires you! It takes real dedication to finish something after the creative motivation is gone and I really appreciate you didn't leave this story unfinished.
Annabel
2023-10-20 15:36:20 +0000 UTCExcellent transformation, and a lovely way to wrap up this story
Annabel
2023-10-20 15:33:41 +0000 UTCA really great story Melissa and great transformations.
King Death
2023-10-19 23:39:10 +0000 UTCThis is a great story, on par with your other stories, especially 'Lesson for the Teacher', my favorite. Please keep up the great work.
Ron
2023-10-19 22:58:06 +0000 UTCSo you didn't go with thembanian wedding scene as i mention a while a ago but you added wedding as something that happened so it's good.
Nino HeΔi
2023-10-19 09:07:34 +0000 UTCThanks for sharing that great story, Melissa!
Charlie
2023-10-19 09:04:50 +0000 UTC
