Aphrodite's Mirror (Chapter 11 Part 1)
Added 2022-10-23 06:32:59 +0000 UTCHere's a new part, guys! If all goes well, I'll post the next part of "journey" tomorrow"! :)
Comments
Excellent new chapter! "Elena" really pulls off those pearls and that elegant black dress. Andrew just needs to stop resisting and give in to being an attractive, classy older woman. I know I would have if I'd have been given his chance when I was his age. ;)
Victor Gerrett
2022-10-26 14:09:51 +0000 UTCI really love to see where this is going.. I guess she will the mother permanently
JONATHAN LUCERO
2022-10-26 13:47:14 +0000 UTCWe'll see, Erica! ;-D
Melissa N.
2022-10-26 04:43:12 +0000 UTCLike Victor said, it's been 3 days only. A year ago was when he proposed to Marina.
Melissa N.
2022-10-26 04:42:54 +0000 UTChehe had some trouble with one render... that's why i said i would post the next day if all went well :-p
Melissa N.
2022-10-26 04:41:29 +0000 UTCI'm going to post it now!
Melissa N.
2022-10-26 04:40:30 +0000 UTCThanks!
Melissa N.
2022-10-26 04:40:22 +0000 UTCMaybe... hehe
Melissa N.
2022-10-26 04:40:16 +0000 UTCSo glad you are enjoying it! :)
Melissa N.
2022-10-26 04:39:34 +0000 UTCThank you, Matthew! :)
Melissa N.
2022-10-26 04:39:21 +0000 UTCAndrew has understood that the trap has closed on her and that it will be complicated to become again what he was!
Erica Rost
2022-10-25 20:01:58 +0000 UTCNo, the first slide after the chapter opening says "Three days later". Andrew is just flashing back to a year prior when he proposed to Marina.
Victor Gerrett
2022-10-25 19:10:15 +0000 UTCHas she been like this a full year?
DJ
2022-10-25 18:01:14 +0000 UTCWhats the definition of tomorrow?
MonsSlots
2022-10-25 15:12:43 +0000 UTCAbsolutely agree, something very intriguing regards Marina's involvement in this, I can't believe a newlywed wife would leave her husband in such a bind so easily,if anything, Andrew should feel abandoned by her and see the flaws in their relationship, Marina didn't give any time to Andrew to explain himself and now everything has escalated, I am so intrigued to find out all the plot twists eventually, I love the transformation, from a young handsome guy into a stunningly beautiful older woman, one of my favourite stories around xxx
Alison St John
2022-10-25 13:45:39 +0000 UTCCan't wait for the next journey part!
Lebruh-
2022-10-25 05:35:39 +0000 UTCi cant wait for the nextone
mike
2022-10-24 22:01:42 +0000 UTCWhat beautiful rendering and it all helps makes this great story come to life. What is Marina up to? She seems to have disappeared along with the mystery woman who was fleetingly seen again a couple of posts ago. I can't help feeling that this isn't simply a fortuitous accident that all this has happened. I feel this was planned long before the wedding and Elena is going to be around for a while.
Robyn Hoode
2022-10-23 18:19:46 +0000 UTCwhoahhh !!! what a chapter !!! so well prepared for the next level of adventures... so exciting story !
Aurélie Trave
2022-10-23 13:56:22 +0000 UTCLove the dress; love the back and forth. Most importantly, I love the inner dialogue. Elena is about to have her life changed forever
Matthew
2022-10-23 10:29:15 +0000 UTC
