The Wayhaven Chronicles—Second Demo Out Now!

yessss thank you! the MC (and unit bravo honestly) often just seem so stupid and i try my best to ignore it but it really ruins the whole ‘competent team and detective’ thing

woah dude

I don't know where we can officially send constructive criticism to, so I'll post this here for now: Finally reading through Book 1, 2 and this demo with each LI, I would like to state two things that I feel the MC is so frustratingly bad at; being and acting like an actual Detective. First, during the Bobby-at-home scene in Book 2, MC never looked at his phone in order to see who the last person he was talking to was. That kind of contact information could be critical in knowing what the Detective is up against on the 'real life' front. Second, during the Eric scene in this Demo, the Detective mentions the word 'supernaturals' before anyone else does. A good detective would wait until the speaker mentions the 'thing' they are talking about. The way it is written currently makes it look like Eric was fishing for information and the MC gave it willingly. In legalese, "Never lead the witness. Let the witness do the talking." Also, as a side note: Considering how adamant Adam was in Book 1 that the MC didn't know Bravo were vampires, it seems out of place for the Detective to just promise that any Bravo member would be cool with the invite situation, especially without checking with them first. All 5 (mother included) of them should be pissed at MC for their behavior. Along the same lines, they never proved they were one, they just said they were. And the MC lapped it up. I hope this is a Bobby storyline, because it sounds just like a setup with how careless the MC was.

KRiS

Jeez, this is literally my worst guilty pleasure, I spend so much time reading and rereading that nothing gets done around my house. Curse you Mishka! You’re too good at this writing stuff ugh-on a side note I’ve set aside a whole bunch of money for book three. I’m with you for the long haul (p.s. my heart goes with you, losing a beloved and cherished pet hurts like the LT route in wayhaven to the power of 20, all you can do is cherish the memories you’ve shared and push on)

Emiya ShiroRox

So now finally having the time to read the Demo, I must say the way you add your details for a scene is as amazing as always I always feel I'm actually there or watching it on tv. And how describe your romance/intimate scenes. ( Blushing cough) it is very spot on. By far my fav is Avas the drama is so freaking good. Love every bit of it all of the routes were amazing. Your doing an amazing job. Side note as it has been a while since I've been on here and read all the past posts. My condolences and thoughts are with you. Your doing and awesome job and we all love you. And again my condolences. Have a wonderful day, and thank your for the wonderful world that is Wayhaven

D00MSDAYEFFECT

Mason was tooooooo cute to be truth, i should've expected this ending 😔But im still hopeful about my boy 😂

Vanessa Mesquita

I just wanna add that the Bobby scene- RIGHT AFTER Mason's bakery scene? Bam! Then Tina worried about Verda and then Eric's revelation??? WHIRLWIND OF EMOTIONS 💕💕 I felt like my detective was in a set of revolving doors and I LOVED IT. Honestly- continuing to see Verda handle the truth made me feel so guilty myself and regret telling him 😔 so much so I was considering going back in my Book Two save to change it! But this scene with Eric gives me enough curiosity to keep it this way 🤨

Emilly Little

SECONDING THIS. I made a save there because I tried every single option. Holy smokes 💔❤️

Emilly Little

it was fantastic ... Farah was amazing as usual

Michael Reddy

Totally agree on the Ava part lol

Michael Reddy

Oh, I had plans. I was gonna play F's route, and right after that, jump into the other routes. Well, I finished F's route. Then I grabbed some tissues, made some tea, and wrapped up in a blanket. The F scenes are so wonderful (and a little sad too). I love F so much!! Those 2 chapters were such a joy to read and can't wait to read the other routes soon. 💖

Emu

Ava. Is. KILLING ME. ....more please. On a serious note, I'm always completely blown away when a new demo comes out. This was SO good. It's going to be that much harder to wait for the next one! I couldn't be more excited!

Colton Vance

I already can't wait for the final demo! Is there an approximate month yet for that release? This one was just so good!

ok so i FINALLY finished all the romance routes (i’m a slow reader bc i like to fully absorb everything in this story) and OH MY GOD. MISHKA. I DONT KNOW HOW YOU DO IT BUT YOU NEVER CEASE TO AMAZE ME. ugh i have so much i want to say i don’t even know where to start! well i just got finished playing felix’s route last, and i love his character to death but i usually just view him as a friend rather than romantically, but OH MY GOD. IM NOT EVEN LYING WHEN I SAY I GOT TURNED ON, NOT ONCE, BUT TWICE????? the passionate makeout scenes at the crime scene and outside of the station, HOLY HELL!!!! YOURE MAKING ME FEEL THINGS FOR THIS MAN THAT IVE NEVER FELT FOR HIM BEFORE???? also the angst at the end of mason’s route, CHEFS KISS! you bet your ass i ran out of the bakery crying for dramatic effect hahaha, i cant and wait to see what happens next. and as always, my love for adam is out of this world, he is my One True Love and the Only Man For Me and oh my god, THE ALMOST KISS!!!!!! I WAS GASPING AND SQUEALING LIKE AN IDIOT AND LOVING EVERY SECOND OF IT. also i think it’s funny how nate is the one to scold mason for his sexual remarks and innuendos, BUT THIS MAN IS JUST AS BAD IN HIS OWN ROUTE LMAOOOO I WAS LIKE OKAY NATE, TAKING POINTERS FROM MASON I SEE 🤣 i loved seeing that side of him, 10/10 cannot wait to get him in bed (as well as felix, bc holy shit, if sex with him is anything like those makeout scenes then IM IN TROUBLE AHSKSJ I WAS SUCH A FLUSTERED MESS. i cannot stress how hot those scenes were, i was so shocked. it felt like i was falling for my best friend 🤣). and don’t even get me STARTED on the LT, my second favorite route, the playthrough that causes me so much pain bc it has my two favorite things, adam and angst. I FELT SO BAD FOR BOTH OF THEM THOUGH and i realized it’s just going to get THAT much harder now that we’re getting later into the series 😭 it’s getting so much harder to make adam-favored choices when nate is there looking so in love and hurt/confused 😭 i definitely will have two detectives for that route, one who ends up with adam and one who ends up with nate bc i cant stand to hurt either of them. anyways, these mere two chapters wrecked me so much, i can’t even imagine what’s going to happen when the whole book is released! i love you and everything that you do. thank you so much for sharing your creation with us 😭❤️

Jordan Ellis

You created a new kind of addiction for a lot of us i think hehe. Seriously you are an awesome writer, you really succeed in getting the emotions to hit us in the right place. I loved all the variations of the LI and I'm just extatic to see the rest of book 3. I know i will just be devouring it once again, just like the 2 others.

EricD

What a wonderful comment! And I’m glad the M scene had the right impact, hehe ❤️

Seraphinite Games

Also I LOVEEEEE this book's flow, it feels so suave and confident. I appreciate all your hard work and cannot wait for what's to come!!!

The shop scene w M is literally one of my favorite scenes ever, I played back through like 5 times last night. It hurt so good