CAPTIVE pt3 - pg135
Added 2021-07-29 10:51:24 +0000 UTCAnd so here ends part 3. Phew, this is the longest comic I have drawn by far, totaling at 135 pages. With Vlagg and Gervic finally coming together (pun intended), the story will move on towards the Cragenwall plot. Don't worry, part 4 is already in the works so the next page will be published at the usual schedule.
Looking back, I wish I can rewrite some parts better. I'm pretty sure some of you guys felt that the sex scene came too fast right after Gervic's whole tragic scene and I gotta say, I agree with the flow being too rushed at the end. So I would really appreciate any input about what I can do to improve the story or art. Hopefully, I can conclude this story on a high note in the next and final part!
Comments
The next part will be more sex scenes woven between the story plots. At least it won't be hundreds of pages of only talking haha.
Vju79
2021-07-29 15:49:12 +0000 UTCYeah I am also curious to see if/how Gervic gets cured of his chimerism. Every curse has a way to end it, even so called permanent ones. Hehe. All in all chapter three was really good, a balance out between one and twos majority sex orientation. Keep it up Vju it’s getting spicy and good.
UlvarikBacca
2021-07-29 13:20:18 +0000 UTCBob's character will be fleshed out more in the prequel comic that I had planned to draw after finishing "Captive".
Vju79
2021-07-29 12:10:28 +0000 UTCChapter 3 was pretty well paced in my opinion! I can't wait to see what the next part brings in terms of Gervic and Vlagg but I'm also curious if we'll see some lore of Bob. He's an asshole who did bad shit but he's also intriguing and I'm curious what his deal is personally lol
Indigo
2021-07-29 11:35:26 +0000 UTCCame too fast? I don’t know Chapter 3 was mostly just talking and that was really the only sex scene so to me it could have been some in between. I felt it just keep running on with story. That’s just my opinion could have been more balanced between sex and story.
FuzzyLopunny
2021-07-29 10:58:37 +0000 UTC
