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Little Acres page 22 (SCRIPT EDITED)

Happy Saturday! Hope you're all doing well and staying safe~

EDIT NOTES:  was mulling this page over with my wife and decided to reword it a bit. Sorry for any confusion! Feel free to share your thoughts, I love feedback! 

Little Acres page 22 (SCRIPT EDITED)

Comments

I think it's the placement. Text bubble 3 is attached to text bubble 2, which makes it seems like Gwen is saying both bubbles.

<3 <3 <3

“My wife” you’re gonna make me cry ily

is it the word balloon placement? I can try to fix that

I do find the text on this page a little difficult to follow


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