They wont mind page5 sketch!
Added 2018-02-24 00:08:42 +0000 UTCWhat does Sophie want? get into the sea? maybe strut around on the beach? visit the open showers? the toilets? build a sandcastle? maybe she just wants some sunscreen? I dont think I she wants to lose her bikini bottom just yet ;D but you can leave suggestions, and im going to figure out how to create a poll out of suggestions later. <3
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Going for a swim could be fun! Especially if it gives her a chance to prematurely lose her bottoms...
Stoker Bramwell
2018-02-27 02:43:56 +0000 UTCoh thank you! XD Yeah I was just writing stuff off the top of my head here.. I think Rose wouldnt run around naked right now, but Sophie might go for it, I like the going to the store idea too!! <3. I personally am really into watersports and such, but im not going to do extreme watersports in the main comic. so now the options probably: "Sophie wants a little audience", "need sunscreen but we are all out", "I want to dig a hole in the sand for some privacy/intimacy" or "I really need to go to toilet". I am running into troubles writing dialog and actions because I keep doing the alt version XD but I think Ill just write for intersex Rose first, and then figure out what context would work for the alt. also dont worry about long comments, I love all of this!
Funkybun
2018-02-26 11:31:55 +0000 UTCOoh, Rose is really liking this, isn't she? ;3 I love the characterization in this so much, like the contrast between their reactions to being seen, and how rose pops the boner then nearly panics. Good thing she's got such a great friend with her to save the day :3 Had been wondering how long it'd take Soph to join in hehe I'm curious what Sophie's reaction to Rose's excitement will be, I'm guessing lots of giggling haha. I think they could take a moment to address that maybe. I think Rose might need a little more reassuring before she goes strutting around standing at attention like that. I really like the sandcastle idea, that's such a innocent playful carefree sort of thing to do in the nude like that, and hey, if Rose can't get her member to calm down, she could crouch in the sandcastle for cover for a bit, at least until the surf comes to steal her safe haven (more me musing on how that might fit the narrative than a specific suggestion btw). I feel like that and the sunscreen make the most sense. Though I was thinking, what if they go to grab the sunscreen but realize they forgot it and have to head to a store next to the beach to grab some, after all, there's no going back now, and they can't just let themselves burn, can they? :3 definitely like the idea of something really brazen like that. Also, the toilets could be fun, maybe a little casual peeing, like they both go into the restrooms have a little friendly tinkle together. Not sure how ya feel about pee, though, but it could be a good opportunity for Soph to lose those bottoms. Anyway, sorry to make such a long comment with so many suggestions. This comic is so amazing, dude, and it just keeps getting better. I don't think I've ever seen anyone nail this kind of fun playful exhibitionism like this before, and as someone who's a bit of a nudist and has some (albeit limited) real world experience of this sort of thing, I gotta say the reactions and nervousness come off as very earnest and realistic to me. And I love how things stay cute and playful, without getting all raunchy and overly-sexualized. (Sorry again for the super long comment x3 keep up the amazing work, I'm absolutely loving it <3)
Ash
2018-02-26 03:29:18 +0000 UTC
