the show must go on update
Added 2019-07-03 00:00:03 +0000 UTCok this set is almost done. just a bit more polish on a few of them and some final reveiws and we should be golden
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/et2void6xvphx2k/AADEuS6AwMvN3NxEZGCZGOiya?dl=0
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oh, what a surprise... it did not work 🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️🤦♂️
Simone Spinozzi
2019-07-04 08:35:34 +0000 UTC😅 yes i saw you worked on that too and i gave you feedback for that last time, which is not what this refinement showed... but anyway, here's the gist: The medical thing should show a "progression" of mechanization. You remember the initial joke where she's halfway between robocop, terminator, iron man and President Thomas "Tug" Benson? Basically at the end if she has anything organic left it's her skin and brain. (that would also kind of hide the "plated bikini" which is funny buuuuuut... i was never very comfortable with it at any point if not as an half joke) You have already shown that she got mechanical stuff hidden under her skin here and here. So we already know her skin is fake and she's nearly all robotic. The stuff you're drawing in the diagram makes it seem all that's robotic in her is only what's being shown on the outside. Now: i'm not asking for "stuff that makes sense" here. Something more of a nonsensical doodle like this (that looks mechanical in nature) is enough. In case html does not work here's all the links i posted above in the same order. 😉👍 https://www.patreon.com/posts/show-must-go-on-27759494 https://www.furaffinity.net/view/29654250/ https://www.furaffinity.net/view/30905805/ https://i.pinimg.com/originals/df/59/67/df596790b37465541cb8c50c38c9b084.jpg
Simone Spinozzi
2019-07-04 08:34:48 +0000 UTCthe medical one i am not sure about. i feel it needs something more but i cannot figure out what
Hatton Slayden
2019-07-04 01:23:27 +0000 UTCOOOH! ❤ i love the misdirection here that will be clarified in the very last page... though i might have written that myself and forgot to change here too... but since this is the penultimate page in chapter 4... it works really well... ❤
Simone Spinozzi
2019-07-03 07:41:39 +0000 UTC
