first chapter
Added 2018-05-18 18:36:27 +0000 UTChttps://www.dropbox.com/sh/u2u5p0ac503as0m/AADXJl6fUMrfm8dnAJfzfvP9a?dl=0
ok so this is VERY rough and will be hard to read right now but i thought you might want to keep up with how Raven and the Lilly is going
i don't really know how many pages this will be but i am pretty sure it will be a fun ride once at least legible
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sorry about that. right now i am trying to get everything down so i know approximately how many characters and environments i will need to design. once i get everything down i will go back and polish things up to about the level of the first 7 pages
Hatton Slayden
2018-05-18 21:21:28 +0000 UTC🤔 looks really nice and this being the first long project of yours i see (the longes ones before were under 15 pages) it's going to be a ride. As for legibility i only lost track of what was happening after page 10.
Simone Spinozzi
2018-05-18 20:47:17 +0000 UTC
