Daily Doe: Flowering singles
Added 2017-11-27 00:42:37 +0000 UTConce again we a treated to a garden of lovely ladies. With their sensuous forms simply Blooming from the pages.
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:D i probably would have to redraw her from the ground up. and i see your point. most of this folio was going to be the experimental as in no 3d models. but i realized that would take way too much time so i went back to my normal workflow. the problem is time. i want to push my craft but i also have to get a publication done each week to maintain my current financial needs. this weeks folio i actually started last week and NEXT weeks folio has already been started and i will post it in the next few days....though i hope i will post it before the end of today.
Hatton Slayden
2017-11-28 18:38:38 +0000 UTCroger that. i must admit sun goddess and bug wash are more experimental. with sun goddess i went for a thick comic book line work then went back to my regular paint over and with bugwash i tried a thinner more anime style. for back grounds i see what you mean, as i have apparently gone a bit overboard with the filters. it will be a while before i can get back to this and it will also take several attempts to fix the sun goddess one. so moving forward i hope to see more comments from you in the next two folios i am working on. "hypersleep sex" and another solo one. i will keep the experimental methods out of folios until i can thoroughly practice them in the future. ;) thank you for your feed back
Hatton Slayden
2017-11-28 17:55:27 +0000 UTCSince i've been told many times before to put a disclaimer, let me put it here: <b><i>I AM NOT GOD, WHAT I SAY IS NOT THE ULTIMATE TRUTH, THESE ARE MY OPINIONS.</i></b> For some reasons everybody is fine when i say everything is great, but unless i state the above all the responses i get when i shooting down something is "this is <b>your</b> opinion!". No [censored] sherlock! Really?! I never knew i was not a god. But rants aside. let me go through what i think of this... mess. 🤔 Ok. This was... I'm sorry to say it... but this was bad. Unusually so, given your average quality. I know some artists are touchy, i hope you're not. I'd save only half of the pictures in this pack. Let me go through the images to express why i thought of this, i'm not somebody that says stuff is not to his liking and tells not why (it mostly involves the backgrounds): - Acrobatic Otter - The otter per se is not bad, aside from the antigravity boobs, but the background is a blob mess. I know this was done to emphasize the main character, but instead of looking like you're "focusing the camera" on the main character it feels like you spent a lot of time doing the waterfall, then said "oh shit! Am i still doing this?! I hshould do the rest" and put some random blobs for vegetation and rocks. If you want to improve this image with as little work as possible, all it needs is doing the rocks better, as they are at the same level of focus as the main lady, but right now they look like textured blobs. Keeping the waterfall and greenery out of focus would still be acceptable as we as audience are used to stuff in the background being out of focus, but the rocks need to be redone. - Bathing Zebra - This is ok. Again, the background is out of focus, but the zebra and the splashes come before the background and they have the same level of focus... maaaaaybe i'd blur the splashes a little, since otherwise they seem to be where the camera focuses instead of the zebra. - Bear Scratch - Again, the background here seems an afterthought, i can understand the need to be quick, but there is just too contrast between the main lady and at the very least the one tree where she's scratching. The tree's a blob and she's detailed. That's just jarring. You can keep the rest of the background sketchy but the tree near the bear lady must be redone. - Bee Budding - Very nice, this is perfect. Yes it might seem like the bee is too focused in respect to the flower she's standing on, but the fact is that flowers tend to have those broad lines and the pollen is just as detailed as the bee herself. Also the bee tends to lose detail from the face and chest onwards, soo the contrast with the flower is not as jarring as some of the other pictures' backgrounds. - Bug Wash - Again this is perfect, but mostly because the environment itself is sooo high-tech themed that the broad and crisp strokes instead of making it look like a sketch make it look like an high-tech minimalistic design. - Pool Of Tranquility - This is near perfect, but for a single detail, the pilon on the viewer's right, when it encounters water.... not only there is a water transparency effect there that should not be, but also the pilon has had water drawn at its left side without any sign of wave. - Salty Squirrel - This was perfect. Maybe i'd retouch the background a little in that "balcony" thing where the helm should be... that balcony has a too crisp blend with the moon behind it. It's a bit jarring. but not by much. - Sun Goddess - Oh, my goddess what am i looking at?! This time the background is crisper than the snake lady and the snake lady herself... Sorry but those shoulders and those abdominal muscles... they... well that does not even seem like something you normally draw! Sure i do like muscular ladies, but those are neither muscles nor plated scales... and the twin shoulders... well... i'm sorry i would not even know how to fix them because they are jarring but i can't tell why since they aren't in any anatomy books 🤔
Simone Spinozzi
2017-11-28 17:18:05 +0000 UTC
