The Stuffed Sleuths Affair - Part 1: Something's Fishy
Added 2016-01-17 16:29:14 +0000 UTCA multi-part Nancy Drew mystery starring the world's premier girl detective, her gluttonous chum Bess, Bess' fat-shaming cousin George, a mystery, and a great deal of eating.
Comments
Wow, thanks!
Supercake Studio
2016-03-30 22:52:43 +0000 UTCAbsolutely love this. The language and metaphors are really vivid and original, and the narrative flows wonderfully (it'd be a compelling read even without the chubby stuff!). But best of all the characters. You have a real genius for conversations and character combos: their personalities and interactions are so authentic and great fun. Superb work yet again!
Halrion
2016-03-30 11:07:44 +0000 UTCThis is great! fantastic job yet again.
Laurence Aldors
2016-02-11 09:09:14 +0000 UTCFinally got around to reading this. Love it!
Froppy
2016-01-22 11:05:01 +0000 UTCThanks! I love that kind of story, too, and it seems to be a real rarity in WG fiction, so I aim to fill that niche.
Supercake Studio
2016-01-18 14:20:21 +0000 UTCProbably three. I have the general plot worked out but I might add more on if I get a good idea.
Supercake Studio
2016-01-18 14:16:48 +0000 UTCThe setup for this is actually really good? I mean, what Nancy is doing actually does sound like the sort of counter intuitive punishment people thought worked back then. Also, how many parts is this going to have?
Cmg
2016-01-18 09:08:29 +0000 UTCThis is fantastic. You really got the feel of the old books and at the same time got the eating and weight jokes to tie in organically. If feels like we really are reading an old Nancy Drew that just happens to have a lot of relevant fun for our folk, and thats exactly the sort of stories I've been hoping to see but never do.
Levi Tompkins
2016-01-18 01:49:17 +0000 UTC
