Update and maybe some ideas for terrenbrook.
Added 2025-07-05 13:56:45 +0000 UTCOkay so it's been a delay in uploads so thought I make a post about the situation. I have pretty much finished page 1 for the new two page comic, but because of some irl stuff im still waiting on feedback so don't wanna call it finished until I fully know everything is good.
I have start lines on page 2 and and also next terrenbrook image, and also a bonus image, so there will be progress shared soon on those as well as finished page 1.
but yeah been thinking about terrenbrook page, I have lots of ideas that I could do for this page because it only has 3 panels in original. So I thought maybe I could ask here what you would like to see me add here.
Do you think I should add more internal panels or panels of dragon and his new bulges?
There will be more pages with internals and could add more on those too, but yeah that's why I thought I could ask here, cause maybe someone has good ideas that I don't have right now. ^^
Comments
Yush i will probably have more of those for sure
Armorine
2025-07-05 19:24:14 +0000 UTCI certainly like the internal panels with all the prey pressed up together
PiscesK
2025-07-05 19:07:18 +0000 UTCThanks. I will keep it in mind and maybe add a panel for that then. ^^
Armorine
2025-07-05 15:28:18 +0000 UTCMaybe add an ellipsis after ‘Breakfast and lunch’ so it’s ’Breakfast and lunch …’ A fun idea is to add ‘URP’ in the comic portion (not in a speech bubble) between the two speech bubbles: ‘I would love to stay and chat but I really should digest you’ and ‘somewhere else…’
Scotty
2025-07-05 15:20:38 +0000 UTCYou write "Now we know what happened to the last campers. They ended up being digitized inside a dragon. MOM HELP!" and someone blames the one who had the idea of camping in this forest and says that they will die because of him.
Ice Might
2025-07-05 15:03:01 +0000 UTC
