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SI: CH4: line art - pg13

I wasn't kidding when I said inflated snatch ;)


Artist note: I do remember what happened with issue3, and like I stated back then, I do plan on adding new types of swelling to this series. It was (rightfully) brought to my attention last time that the inflation event from the last issue made no sense and came from nowhere without explanation. I re-did the scene to reflect the more recognized belly-preggo expansion. However, also taking advice from other patrons, new elements such as the bee alien were created to fill those logic gaps, and bring new expansions in the series. moving forward, I will keep to my initial promise that belly=preggo will be the main expansion theme, with other expansion types being peppered in to add some new flavors.

I know this decision is upsetting to some, but it was always the original writer's intention into introduce different types of expansions, with belly still being the top spot.

SI: CH4: line art - pg13

Comments

I like doing something different as long as the story is set up for it. Last issue it started with belly/preg but had then switched to full body suddenly, that was the problem. This is nice because it actually calls for it with the beesting device. Just as long as there is continuity and all.

Evil Kracker

Understandable but I still feel like it’s a bit negative like this could come out great I don’t see why people just give it a chance

Lanturn

Well people have something of a vested financial interest in this comic series. Now sure, if this was purely on hentaifoundry or deviantart and no one was paying a dime toward it then it would be more fair to say for fans to cool their jets. But every member here is putting real money toward this so really nothing wrong with them expressing their thoughts and opinions be they positive or negative.

Hana Chan

Jesus can everyone get of monocles ass they’re the artist they wanted to make the story with a different type of inflation with logic behind it it’s literally in the description so if don’t like it then just leave you don’t have to be a jerk about it

Lanturn

I know I'm just a lowly $1 donator so my opinion probably doesn't have much weight but this feels like a major slap to the face. A lot of people above me have already said it better but this balloon inflation does not look good and is not why I stayed a supporter. What really gets me is you talk about doing other kinds of inflation but as others have pointed out you instead went back to the very thing that a majority made clear they didn't want to see.

HexaFlower

Would had prefer the inflation to be more gradual. Her sudden size and position does look a little off. Feels like a page is missing between the 2. Could of showed her body slowly expand as she panicked,

Tj2417

I agree with the last comic them ballooning didn't make much sense but it does here. I don't know I don't understand the big fuss

Tj2417

Wow she ballooned big! There are all different type of inflation fans out there I like that it's not the same each time. You do good work! And yes the original comic designer had tons of work with full body, tits, ass, lips!!!! All got inflated!!!

Tj2417

Yes indeed

Lanturn

Please not this full body inflation again. I really thought after the major division caused last time that this biz was put out to pasture. But instead doing it again on the very next story? I just dont get it.

CorsairCavalier

Spherical inflation isn't really my thing, but I also don't care if you choose to try new things occasionally. Erotica and Sarah going down on their teacher mostly evens it out in my opinion.

unrlcrft

I think you're seeing pushback because of a disconnect in expectations. You've said "Well, this was planned by the original author", but it was *never mentioned*, and I certainly didn't sign up because I was interested in full body inflation. I, personally, find that sort of thing just silly looking and unattractive. Right now, you have a bunch of fans of the existing story *that has been made public*. Apparently, as we've seen previously, there's not a large overlap between full body inflation fans and belly/breast expansion fans. If you really want to go with full body inflation, I think you're going to continue to get lots of push back (and probable lost supporters. I'm certainly not interested in supporting that sort of thing, at least) unless it's made clear *from the outset* of what content people are supporting. ------ TL;DR full body inflation kills my boner.

Fake Name

I'm sure due to the general frosty responses thus far you are going to get some "attaboy" comments/likes. But reality is, still a real disappointment to see you immediately circle back around to this balloon body thing again. And looking at the other amazing preggo inflation you've done in the past this just does not look visually appetizing at all. Especially when you've already shown you can do better then this.

Kenneth

The overall huge sizes isn't the problem. but compared to the previous pages and the way you styled the inflation there this current page just looks purely hilarious. weather it is your intention or not this just hits like you are trying to force this ballooning stuff

SommerColors

I respectfully disagree. Swelling Invasion has always been about cartoonishly large-growing girls. Remember the events of Issue 2? Sara and Erotica's bellies ended up the size of small buildings. If you don't like balloon bodies, that's one thing, and I respect your opinions, but this series will always devolve into comical bigness in one way or another.

Monocle

get wanting to branch out but this really just took a downright comical turn. wish you woudl just leave this type of balloon humans behind

SommerColors

bee sting causes a different kind of swelling. Wouldn't make much sense to get preggo from a bee sting right?

Monocle

Oh...

Hana Chan

Not this again

FinCont

Oh bee stung is swelling not inflation huh

Lanturn


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