Therapy
Added 2024-09-09 13:00:00 +0000 UTCThe extra scene is a bad joke between employees (Sorry). "I was not sure about this idea, but at the suggestion of “rocks” I decided to take courage. I liked your suggestion (Yours lovingly, Maria)." Thanks for your support. La escena extra del final es una mala broma entre empleadas (Sorry). "No estaba segura de toda la idea, pero decidí intentarlo por sugerencia de "rocks". Me gustó tu sugerencia (Con cariño, Maria)." Gracias por el apoyo.
Comments
Events progressed a little fast, and there were a few English errors, but the concept and execution of this short story were really good! I even appreciated the PSA at the end~
lifmcs
2024-09-11 09:29:55 +0000 UTCVery solid, but my suggestion would be to use more creative methods of brainwashing. Machines, lights, Nano bots, anything to make it seem impossible for the girls to realize shes brainwashed.
rocks
2024-09-09 16:15:01 +0000 UTC
