Weekly Update - Alpha Preview
Added 2020-07-07 20:51:24 +0000 UTCBleeeeeh. And after another futile late night push and with only a very short while before I head to work, I need to give up on trying to get this done before my update once again.
I probably shouldn't do this, but because it must seem dubious because of how long this whole thing has dragged on I've decided to include a link to where you can see the most updated version of the story, so you can see I'm legit when I say it really is just a matter of getting the final section fixed up and uploaded. Some of it needs to be edited still, but largely it's 43 pages I'm fairly happy with.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TxxX1wW-h6fNkos4UP1wqNdhws_qB2-sLuG3TxyNAYI/edit?usp=sharing
Read if you're interested, or just wait a little longer if you don't want to be spoiled. Sorry once again!
-J
Comments
Hey, don't worry about it dude. Take your time and enjoy it! Writing shouldn't be a chore, and with a quality chapter like this, waiting a little longer isn't too bad. What you have looks awesome and I can't wait to read the rest once it's written up. Minor note though, in the bullet points (#7 when Robin and Say'ri are drunk and talking) maybe instead of Robin asking if he ever had a chance with Say'ri, maybe (given she's buzzed and loose right now too and according to point #1 it might be her POV) have Say'ri ask instead why he hasn't married Lucina yet. From what's implied in her thoughts and pov so far, that's the whole reason she's holding back, right? You could have that flow into the conversation about duty and whatnot since Robin making the implication that he doesn't necessarily want to marry Lucina might come back to bite him. Or maybe that's the point? Maybe you do have a plan for this conversation with Say'ri to come up again, then again they are drunk, so she could probably easily forget the whole context of their discussion and only remember the deed their about to do... Bah, ignore me! I'm speculating because I'm excited! Your story, you do you man! Can't wait for the full chapter and don't worry about taking a little longer than you thought to write it. Take it easy! Again, super excited for the chapter when you finish!
Anonamata
2020-07-08 07:20:22 +0000 UTCThank you, sorry again it's been so slow
2020-07-07 23:16:56 +0000 UTCLooks great so far can't wait for the rest of it!
AppleCookies
2020-07-07 23:15:59 +0000 UTC
