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Jack & Jill - Phase 9, Part 23

Liam / Liza's "origin story" begins...

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Comments

To the Bear, that is what Liam is! 😬 Thank you, Stacy.

Emory Ahlberg

Vanya, your comment was the opposite of silly. 💕 Passionate readers asking smart questions about structure are a gift, so thank you. You were not wrong to feel that the pace was tightening! I really wanted to create an almost claustrophobic sense of time slowing down right before the Coming Out event, to make those final hours before everything ignites feel incredibly tense. To me, showing what brought Liza and Hannah to that table isn't a detour because every person at that breakfast is a mirror showing a different reflection of what this system does to people, and all of those reflections will play a part in what happens when the final game begins. The wait, I promise, is nearly over. ☺️

Emory Ahlberg

Oh wow!.....that last pic just screams 'posession' x

stacy C

Thanks Emory. Didn't mean to sound like a silly goose, just anxious. I get the point now and thank you. Can't wait till the new episode!! I do love your work, and the story!

Vanya


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