Jack & Jill - Phase 9, Part 6
Added 2024-07-08 06:58:08 +0000 UTCConnor awakens with a big pair of problems... π
23 new pages of Jack & Jill for this episode. I can't wait to read your thoughts!
EDIT: I changed the image for page 23... I didn't like how it came out!
Comments
Thank you, Nina! This is the part that has me really nervous... but it's what Jack & Jill has been building toward for 7 years. π¬
Emory Ahlberg
2024-09-10 04:56:59 +0000 UTCand now it all comes crashing together, the plot lines emory!! theyβre connecting!!
Nina
2024-08-16 07:53:55 +0000 UTCLOL, thank you, Stacy! I wish I had the talent to make a whole show with Vix! π¦
Emory Ahlberg
2024-07-14 18:52:47 +0000 UTCYes, they'll still grow with more HRT and surgeries, which means Connie's transformation is far from over. It's likely "the prince" has a preference for an exaggerated, hyper-feminine look!
Emory Ahlberg
2024-07-14 18:52:07 +0000 UTCThank you, Strangest! Hm! I doubt Xu would allow her to do so again since she already did with Nikki. Xu seems to be trying to teach Jill a lesson about the limits of trying to "save everyone." Trading something for Connorβs surgery wouldn't serve Xu's long-term psychological goals for Jill. He wants to see how far sheβll go and how much sheβs willing to sacrifice OF OTHERS without giving her an easy out.
Emory Ahlberg
2024-07-14 18:50:53 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Gemma! This sort of engagement is fun and, I think, important for the story. I want to show my appreciation for those who take the time to comment! π
Emory Ahlberg
2024-07-14 18:48:14 +0000 UTCπ€£ Thank you, CK! And each character is trying to navigate their own survival while anticipating the others' strategies...
Emory Ahlberg
2024-07-14 18:47:36 +0000 UTCFun idea, Nolwenn! π
Emory Ahlberg
2024-07-14 18:45:25 +0000 UTCI want to see that cartoon with the sexy fox hehe x
stacy C
2024-07-14 11:48:17 +0000 UTCI was just thinking of it, but if connie's breast is still tiny when he get is boob job, his breast will possibly stil continue to grow with hormones ( i mean at some point). His breast and ass will be enormous at the end) So i think his owner love real big boobs bimbos. I hope we could met his owner soon. I'm curious how will react connie the first time he sees him.
Nolwenn
2024-07-14 08:56:38 +0000 UTCI think that Jill will trade something for Connor's something else this Phase... If so it'd be a little cliche
Strangest
2024-07-11 07:16:50 +0000 UTCI am grateful for and always enjoy reading your thoughtful responses Emory to readers comments.
Gemma
2024-07-11 04:25:58 +0000 UTCSo glad you're enjoying the story, Bobbie! π Jill stepping up to save Connor from another surgery would be a powerful move. Jill has always shown immense strength and adaptability, so it wouldn't be surprising if she found a way to turn her own trauma into an act of defiance - again!
Emory Ahlberg
2024-07-11 04:17:10 +0000 UTCThanks, Gemma! Youβve hit on a lot of key points. Yeah, Connorβs initial reaction to his new body is definitely a shock to his system. And I think Jill's determination to protect Connor is crucial because it again showcases her empathy and her struggle against the system that changed her. And yes, Emilyβs reaction upon seeing Jill encapsulates so muchβshock, disbelief, and the realization of just how profoundly Second Dawn has altered their lives already!
Emory Ahlberg
2024-07-11 04:16:00 +0000 UTCI'm not agree with you. I don't think connor should be like Jill. Sure some people are more open minded than other. I don't think connor is a sexist Asshole ( he is just an asshole^^). Jill had a slow transformation. She had time to accept what happened to her. ( same thing for sandy and nicky) Connor get a feminisation like you go to fast-food. His mind don't have time to adapt and accept what is happening to him. It's like the trauma to loose legs and arms in a car accident. So i understand that it could be like the end of his world. He defined himself as a man like he say. So he never imagined he could be a woman and it's logic and a bit old school. But it's logic. And i know a lot of peoples like that ( man or woman) And yes he have no choice..
Nolwenn
2024-07-11 02:30:56 +0000 UTCThank you for the kind words, sapiens! Itβs super encouraging to read comments like yours. A spin-off about Connor/Connie... I can picture it, actually. It'd be like "The Princess Diaries" meets "Full Metal Jacket"! π But, yeah, it would force Connie to navigate a world where her value is predicated entirely on her appearance. Definitely not something Connor is used to!
Emory Ahlberg
2024-07-10 05:46:01 +0000 UTCGina wants to be friends with Jill so bad - but I don't think that's in the cards. π€£ I was originally going to have a sexy crossdressing animated rabbit a la Bugs Bunny but changed it to a CGI vixen at the last minute. π¦
Emory Ahlberg
2024-07-10 05:37:44 +0000 UTCThanks so much, Ella! I'm definitely having fun with them. π
Emory Ahlberg
2024-07-10 05:24:36 +0000 UTCAnd family reunions can be stressful even under the best circumstances! π
Emory Ahlberg
2024-07-10 05:11:09 +0000 UTCThis has been a rather transitional chapter - never better said.... But we already see how the pieces are positioned on the board β...and the cliffhanger!
ckarya
2024-07-09 18:06:33 +0000 UTCI would like to have mummy Connie as pin up next monthπ
Nolwenn
2024-07-09 14:45:41 +0000 UTCBeen thinking about how whiny Connor has been through this ordeal. He says heβs so tough and trained to resist, but like he folds at feminization? How ridiculous and pathetic to be completely thrown over by it. Boo hoo hoo, poor lil Connor has to live like a woman. What a sexist asshole! Like even now, he can hardly bring himself to give it a shot- Iβm not like you Jill - he says. Well, maybe he should be more like Jill. Itβs not like Davis and Hatcher are going to give him any choice in this situation.
Jade Diaz
2024-07-09 07:00:27 +0000 UTCSame!
Jade Diaz
2024-07-09 06:56:45 +0000 UTCLoving your creations as always Emory. β€ I hope Jill saves Connor/Connie from the planned SRS by putting herself forward for it instead. π€ Wrenching the final part of her transition from the control of her captors. Completing her journey to womanhood on her own terms. This ultimately only delays Connie's final surgery by a few months but crucially allows her enough time to adapt mentally to a female future rather than irrevocably spiral. β€π€β€
Bobbie
2024-07-08 23:28:03 +0000 UTCI like the subtle but mind blowing new POV experience Connie encounters of his/ her new assets. That is one way to snap out of anaesthetic haze. Whilst I am pleased that Connor can see Jillβs determination to fight for his manhood I am interested to see Connorβs full transformation into Connie. I hope the potential rescue siege that seems to be playing out does not happen before Connor has undergone GRS. It would be interesting to see his/ her new relationship and shift in dynamics between Connor/ Connie and her former wife Emily. I am so amazed by the last image in this chapter. and how in this simple image how much you are able to convey through just showing the expression in Emilyβs eyes the enormity of her shock and surprise she is going through seeing Jill, her former macho brother for the first time.
Gemma
2024-07-08 22:13:28 +0000 UTCI would easily accept a spin-off solely about Connor/Connie throughout their entire process of acceptance, all the way to their final destiny of being sold to a prince and becoming a great trophy wife. Emory, itβs always good to remember that your work is becoming increasingly beautiful technically. You continue to evolve impressively (in addition to being an excellent writer).
sapiens1559
2024-07-08 16:16:52 +0000 UTCI want to see that pixar movie.
Fraylim
2024-07-08 15:31:28 +0000 UTCMy absolute favorite parts of this episode are the unanswered texts from Gina labeled "Reason that I'm here" and the Troy McClure-style animated educational video. I'm trying to decide if Emory is blatantly appealing to her furry audience members or if she herself has some kind of furry affinity. (Not that there's anything wrong with that!)
Jade Diaz
2024-07-08 14:54:36 +0000 UTCHatcher's perspective on her work has been consistent throughout this entire story. The _reasons_ for it are not ever fully revealed, but in some ways they ultimately don't matter much. Surgical feminization machine go brrrrr.
Jade Diaz
2024-07-08 14:52:15 +0000 UTCConnor's voice is unchanged, as of yet.
Jade Diaz
2024-07-08 14:40:06 +0000 UTCI like this chapter. I thought Connor/Connie was going to take his/her anger out Jill and Hatcher, but was too upset and horrified at the moment about his/her new look. Unlike Jack/Jill (after his surgery) being trained by Holly, Connie's process of womanhood going extremely fast by Davis to sold to a prince. I wonder what his/her voice would sound like? Dr. Hatcher is an interesting character due to her conversation with Jill about her views of men and women in terms of men vs himself or men vs nature expressed in surgerical arts. Josie and Emily have finally found Jill. I wonder how they would react , especially Emily, about her former brother/sister being a member of the Second Dawn and her former husband being rebirth into womanhood and sold to a prince? Would she like his/her voice and body?
Tiki D
2024-07-08 12:27:54 +0000 UTCItβs being a fantastic experience these last intense parts!
Ella Cherry
2024-07-08 11:43:11 +0000 UTCNow, muse Alyson. Cliffhangers are the best.
Alex From the Tri-Cities
2024-07-08 08:12:08 +0000 UTCWow, just wow...my muse Emory, where oh where do I even begin with this great work of art? First off, I will begin with offering my congratulations and a quote from Thomas Hobbes: "Hell is but truth seen too late." You are a mistress of words and renders, indeed. Secondly, I must say that GREAT MINDS THINK ALIKE and watching and reading Dr. Hatcher's words and rendering I felt the rage and utter betrayal Dr. Delilah CroweΒ©β’ feels towards Elizabeth Hatcher for her betrayal (how are you make Summer into your plaything, Elizabeth) and Summer Chastity CroweΒ©β’ feels for her utter and complete hypocrisy...making toys for a man whose "culture" treats all non-men as toys. In fact, my own Xuniverse dialogue between them has Summer asking Hatcher why she just didn't let her bleed to death after Anton and Yasir botched her castration. Hatcher answer how much she still cares about her mother and the other Crowe sisters, Summer's aunts. She doesn't mention per se, but Summer deduces Hatcher suffered either a violent attack, emotional abuse or...full on "Ramsay & Sansa's Wedding Night" which may have left her sterile. Hold on to your Wattpad, ladies, gentlemen, muse Emory, muse Alyson and muse Zoe. P.S. Muse Emory, muse Alyson and muse Zoe: feel free to reply and tell me how wrong and crazy I am about Hatcher's existentialist misandry. Maggie and Jade, please say something too.π€π€π€π€
Alex From the Tri-Cities
2024-07-08 08:10:43 +0000 UTCoh my god this cliffhanger you cow
Alyson Greaves
2024-07-08 08:08:49 +0000 UTCThank you, Maggie! Cliffhangers are the nature of the best, hehe. But who says Xu will die for sure? π
Emory Ahlberg
2024-07-08 07:55:27 +0000 UTCGeeeezzz fuck, those cliffhangers are killing me β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈ.......... because we already know that Xu is about to die very soon and I think that means a permanent stop of all activities on the island... Connors cock & balls are saved... hmmm sooo that means there is an open window for full detransition for him? Hmmm NGL that I was kinda intrigued by the thought he will loose his manhood completely and being forced by this to adapt with help of his "famous sister-in-law" β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈ P.S. Emily I believe your eyes couldn't be open any wider :) Be careful and chill... β£οΈ
Maggie Heels
2024-07-08 07:50:09 +0000 UTCAgreed muse Zoe.
Alex From the Tri-Cities
2024-07-08 07:44:43 +0000 UTCYea, more family reunions ππ«£
Omagathief
2024-07-08 07:12:03 +0000 UTCPlease be cool, Emily. Please be cool. Don't react or you'll blow everything to hell.
Zoe Storm
2024-07-08 07:10:36 +0000 UTC
