Jack & Jill - Phase 9, Part 4
Added 2024-06-24 01:06:23 +0000 UTCWe have 25 new pages of Jack & Jill! Phase 9 is only just getting started, but we already have a lot of plots up in the air. I hope you enjoy the multiple characters!
This part has more "world-building" than is usual, with a bit of glimpse into the workings of Second Dawn.
Oh, and you'll see some fallout from that Half Sisters poll, too... 😈
I can't wait for your thoughts! ❤️
Comments
Hehe... you may be on to my tricks, Nina! I love a good red herring. Honestly, Davis also just seems like the kind of man who would carry a gun on him whenever possible - always hoping something bad would happen and he'd get a chance to shoot someone.
Emory Ahlberg
2024-09-10 04:59:20 +0000 UTCam i surprised davis seems to be the catalyst for our flash forward we had originally? no. could this be a way of you throwing davis the obvious bad guy out as a red herring? yes. i think somehow you redeem this man slightly even tho he’s trash. like i can see something happening where he helps someone live in his last moments or something. either way super stoked to read a ton all at once :D
Nina
2024-08-16 07:42:05 +0000 UTCEvery story needs a good antagonist! So, I'm glad you "love to hate" him 😊. And you're probably right about that last part! LOL
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-30 05:05:06 +0000 UTCHe has a sweet tooth! LOL 🍭
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-30 05:02:14 +0000 UTCThank you, CK! You're right to be suspicious of course. 😉 And, yes, lots of plot is still to come! Speaking of the Coven... look forward to Part 5 tomorrow! Yes, there are female Platinum Star Members, but they're relatively rare - about 20% of them are women.
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-30 05:01:57 +0000 UTCThat's a really good point, Nigel. She can help Nikki if she's able to convince her "daughter" that it's for Nikki's own good. And that might not be too hard with all the evidence she has about how bad Hutchinson can be when he is disappointed!
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-30 05:00:03 +0000 UTCHonestly, me too, hehe - Maybe it'll still be developed 😉
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-30 04:56:46 +0000 UTCI kind of really like Davis. I don't know why. He is just a good bad guy😁. But honnestly i didn't think that "having small breast" could be a argument for him😅
Nolwenn
2024-06-30 01:24:54 +0000 UTCCan I ask Em.....why is Davis holding a particularly girlly lolipop in the first scenes hehe x
stacy C
2024-06-29 23:43:44 +0000 UTCVery shocking flashforwards (on page 2, I don't know why, but Davis reminds me of Kevin Spacey as Frank Underwood in House of Cards). I'm always suspicious when the author or director 'throws the killer in our face' in a very direct way, so I don't think it will be Davis who shoots Xu... although I also don't trust that trick and that it's done on purpose so that we discard it for 'easy'... hehehehe I think a lot will happen in the remaining hours, so I'd rather not try to guess right now, because I imagine that more suspects will be added as the hours go by. I'm really looking forward to seeing the meeting of the Coven and getting to know its members and how they work, their relationships, interrelationships, etc. Also, with the news that Gina will bring and the reunion of Jill and Holly, it's going to be a very, very interesting meeting. On the other hand, Emory, a doubt, are there female Platinum Members? Keep up the good work!
ckarya
2024-06-27 20:03:22 +0000 UTC❤️ Thank you, Ella! I really want it to feel like the newest episode of a special TV show, hehe.
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-27 03:20:46 +0000 UTCThanks, Anon! Yes, it's fun to have a little bit of a connection between Half Sisters and J&J - and I especially like the idea of the results of poll impacting a character in a different story, too. 😊 You were right about Davis! We'll see if he gets away with it...
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-27 03:19:34 +0000 UTCThank you very much, Cry! I really enjoyed conceptualizing the "flashforwards" and giving glimpses into the state of things right after the shooting. Hopefully it'll keep people guessing. 😊 If the Second Dawn is destroyed, maybe somebody will sneak away with the research data... 😉
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-27 03:07:00 +0000 UTCWith Davis, there's no such thing as "enough!" I'm curious who you will resurrect for your fanfic! But yes, please go for it and post the link for me. 😊 I still remember that Mason pinup - and it's slowly moving closer to reality... just like the alternate reality "Connie" I did around the same time!
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-27 02:59:27 +0000 UTCGreat catch, Richard! And Brooke obviously hates Davis because he's the one who forced her into the program after her own algorithm "recommended" her. Plus, she's supposed to be allowed to pick her own Platinum Star member to be with! Yes, this will be a huge blow if it is allowed to proceed...
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-27 02:53:49 +0000 UTCElaine now has effective control of the transition to full femininity of three gorgeous girls. At this stage sexy Sophia is 75% female physically and mentally. Beautiful Kendra is 100% physically but nil mentally. Darling Nikki is 50% physically (when can she get rid of that awful penis sheath?) and perhaps only 25% mentally but that seems likely to increase rapidly.
Nigel Melville
2024-06-26 11:36:19 +0000 UTCHear me out. Brooke gets access to her algorithm again. She puts in a "backdoor" to manually add Davis to the list...
Thomas Tolliver
2024-06-26 11:12:45 +0000 UTCI wondered that too. It seems foolhardy in all sorts of ways - unless Xu is himself Chinese and it’s yet another means of Davis testing his patience and his limits. It could be that Davis is considering a coup.
Robertlouis
2024-06-26 06:41:27 +0000 UTC❤️, Zoe! Davis knows well that Brooke is beloved by the other companion girls, as well. Ava is her bestie, and they have a good relationship with Gina and the other members of the Coven (who we haven't met yet). He's trying to assert himself...
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-26 04:17:00 +0000 UTCThank you, Robert! Brooke is in the process of choosing / seducing who to be with from among the Platinum Star candidates. That's a privilege the companions receive that the toys (obviously) do not. So, by attempting to "steal" Brooke from the companion department, he really is testing the limits of his authority!
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-26 04:15:06 +0000 UTCWow! Thank you so much, Gemma! (Although I believe you mean 'Davis' and not 'Mason' in this case - don't worry, there are a lot of characters! ❤️) Davis like to imagine himself in the role of a truly important man, but Xu knows his worth. He's a brute and a bully and a sociopath, and this has been useful in his role as the administrator of the 'Toy' department of Second Dawn. But he thinks he's far more important than he actually is! Jill's empathy is her superpower... long neglected during her life as Jack. But could it also bring her to danger? Will she be able to save everyone? And what happens if she tries?
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-26 04:12:11 +0000 UTCAll caught up on Brooke and I agree, Davis can't have her. She would break. Oh no!
Thomas Tolliver
2024-06-25 19:28:38 +0000 UTCAs bad as davis is, I kinda want to see the gene tailored hrt version 2, especially the increased feminization effects lol
Jay
2024-06-25 18:09:16 +0000 UTCThank you, Tiki! I was hoping the world-building would be interesting. 😊
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-25 16:59:24 +0000 UTCYes, there are internal politics happening at Second Dawn, as well. People vying for power...
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-25 16:58:32 +0000 UTCThanks, Tiki. She's really good at looking lovely. Lots of practice. 😉
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-25 16:56:40 +0000 UTCIf anyone can reminder me of a phase and part to re-read...
Thomas Tolliver
2024-06-25 12:52:12 +0000 UTCI don't remember Brooke at all, lol
Thomas Tolliver
2024-06-25 01:50:10 +0000 UTCLove the beginning! So cinematographic!
Ella Cherry
2024-06-25 00:25:45 +0000 UTCLove how the stories are having this touch point and reminding us of the interconnections. Also the anticipation building up through the cuts between the crisis happening at the coming out event and the flashbacks in interesting. Waiting for that payoff! Also, I totally called it about Davis taking a payback after losing Kendra! Didn't see Brooke being the target, excited to see what happens next!
non anon
2024-06-24 17:25:24 +0000 UTCI'm a sucker for the world building, so knock yourself out. Great job on the chapter and handling so many moving parts. Loving the cinematic "44 hours later" bits. Definitely adding some tension there. If Second Dawn falls, I'm curious if we'll get to see how potent that HRT v2 is.
Cryofly
2024-06-24 16:35:14 +0000 UTCEww, Davis leave poor Brooke alone, you disgusting murderous sociopath. Haven't you done enough to her already?? Now muse Emory, I will keep my word of honor to you and Jade Diaz/F.B.I Special Agent Ruby Vega and will NOT post a full-length Xuniverse fanfiction snippet the comments but I will respectfully and humbly request your permission to "resurrect"/reveal a character of yours...or 19 to be exact....who really bears a massive grudge against Davis and who like my own Dr. Delilah Crowe©™ wants to see Second Dawn destroyed but will use stealthy means to destroy them from within by taking away what gives them their power...namely their money. Finally in the July 2021 pinup, my muse, you showed us all what could potentially happen to Dr. Mason, which staunchly moral and Catholic Summer Chastity Crowe©™ utterly despises from having grown a conscience too late, not to mention Anton & Yasir as well for castrating her.
Alex From the Tri-Cities
2024-06-24 13:22:23 +0000 UTCI think I know why Davis has a gun in hand at the beginning. Probably he was told that Brooke is off limits to him and if that comic would be drawn in cartoon way he would probably be fuming steam from both ears and nostrils with bloated red head... hehehe
Maggie Heels
2024-06-24 05:58:44 +0000 UTCJust reread Brooke's introduction and Holly has a line when reassuring Brooke that she's not just a man playing dress up or else Davis would have taken her. What a hit that he settled on her now.
Richard Head
2024-06-24 05:34:47 +0000 UTCI mean, why does Davis think _China_ is ripe for feminization as opposed to any other country? I mean, shouldn't he start with a nice small country like -- I don't know -- Grenada first to work out the process? As usual, freaking amazed by the thoughtfulness behind these logos. Cracker jack graphic design team there at Clinic 12. And if Clinic 13 is really going online in "a year" it must've been under construction for a while. I wonder where that's going to be located? I kind of love that Davis wants to take Brooke for himself. Can you imagine the ways that she will resist that Kendra never would? I certainly can. Brooke is so much smarter than Davis, like she can sabotage him in so many ways, and probably do it surgically, sneaky, and plant evidence against people who need to be removed to bring down Second Dawn. This is what I like to call sowing the seeds of your own destruction.
Jade Diaz
2024-06-24 04:56:15 +0000 UTCYou're not alone
Jade Diaz
2024-06-24 04:52:33 +0000 UTCNope. Nope nope nope. Hands off Brooke, you bastard.
Zoe Storm
2024-06-24 04:37:55 +0000 UTCThere’s clearly another plan already in place for Brooke. It looks like Davis might be getting into a power play with Xu. He might have accepted the loss of Kendra, but he’s dead set on getting whatever he wants as a replacement, and if that means challenging Xu all the way, he’s up for it. Interesting to say the least!
Robertlouis
2024-06-24 02:56:17 +0000 UTCOh Emory, you really are a genius! I am blown away by your life skills shown by your capacity to create such a realistic world. Your latest chapter reveals not only your visionary imagination but also your understanding and ability to create such authentic power point business model flow charts. Wow! As for Mason, he is so small minded and arrogant. He over estimates both his capacities and worth. His blind anger (at Mr Xu re Kendra) is going to lead him to make a fatal mistake. I suppose he is now odds on favourite suspect for the ‘who shot JR’ (drawing upon old popular tv reference) regarding Mr Xu. In the meantime, I feel so sorry for Brooke, she is so pretty and cute- yuk, stuck with Mason. Jill also has grown so much in the story. Showing great insight, compassion and understanding. She also shows such a great capacity to step back and analyse and understand the different pressures, issues and motivations that shaped Holly (and others). You have really set up this story and are showing your capacity around juggling so many balls at once (excuse the pun). It will be interesting seeing the different stories, sub groups and sub plots playing out in the next few chapters. Truly brilliant work Emory thank you.
Gemma
2024-06-24 01:59:51 +0000 UTCI still want to see Davis get his Just Desserts.
Tiki D
2024-06-24 01:42:44 +0000 UTCYou know that you can edit your posts right? or even you can post all your later comments as a reply to the first one... this way is much easier to read them ;)
Maggie Heels
2024-06-24 01:34:37 +0000 UTCNooo Brooke stay the fuck away from her... you dirty fuckface
Maggie Heels
2024-06-24 01:32:24 +0000 UTCI wonder how Conner/Connie is doing? I wonder about her progress so far?
Tiki D
2024-06-24 01:28:46 +0000 UTCThe world building and how it connects to Half Sisters is interesting, too.
Tiki D
2024-06-24 01:25:54 +0000 UTCThe inner workings of the Second Dawn is very interesting. Xu and Davis have been controlling things from the shadows without the victim realizing in terms of Jack/Jill case being aware, but not fully of everything at the same time. They used rebirth and self-discovery of their victims to their advantage, but at same time not really realizing this could backfire on them.
Tiki D
2024-06-24 01:22:28 +0000 UTCJill really looks beautiful and hot in this chapter.
Tiki D
2024-06-24 01:20:45 +0000 UTC
