Olivia's Transition & Story
Added 2023-11-16 06:26:54 +0000 UTCThank you to everyone who voted! π The winner of the poll was:
Rival's Revenge - Omar had a bitter rival who was determined to beat him on the track. The rival 'arranged' for him to be hurt - but even that wasn't enough! Omar was still faster. The rival, with connections to Second Dawn, had him taken to Clinic 12.
Olivia's story is much different from Ava and Brooke, who were being trained as companions. Olivia, on the other hand, is on the island to become one of the toys. Therefore, the handlers of Second Dawn put no real effort into helping her cope or adapt. π¬
Still, I believe Olivia still has plenty fight left in her - if it found the right spark.
Comments
Kris is a real beauty for sure! And, yeah, even Kris doesn't view herself as "separate" in the way that Chris does.
Emory Ahlberg
2023-12-02 18:52:19 +0000 UTCOne additional comment needs to be made - Kris is a damned fine looking woman! In the last panel, she has a very confident, poised look, not like someone who's filled with trepidation about what she has to do, but someone who is confident in herself and her ability to get this one task done. Clearly it's Kris, not Chris. But hopefully, this will also be a chance for Chris to start realizing that Kris isn't a made-up invisible friend, but is part of him. Then he can start accepting what he can't change, and confidently working to change what he can - and become whole again.
Elrod W
2023-11-22 22:34:50 +0000 UTCπππ As always, I love how you think, Stacy!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-11-21 17:34:58 +0000 UTCπππ
Emory Ahlberg
2023-11-21 17:34:42 +0000 UTCPhase 9 is coming, Thomas. We will find out soon enough! There's plenty of obstacles for Olivia and the rest of Xu's 'girls' to overcome...or fail in the attempt. π¬
Emory Ahlberg
2023-11-21 17:34:27 +0000 UTCVengeance is a dish best served cold - and in high heels. π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-11-21 17:32:47 +0000 UTCπ
Emory Ahlberg
2023-11-21 17:32:11 +0000 UTCThank you, Maggie! Trent is certainly a bastard and half - not to mention a sore loser! Olivia's story is dark...but that doesn't mean there isn't a light at the end of the tunnel. π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-11-21 17:31:59 +0000 UTCAw, thank you so much, Autrumn. I'm glad you enjoyed Olivia's story. Hopefully it has a happier ending!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-11-21 17:30:55 +0000 UTCGreat stuff, maybe one day Trent will receive the same treatment and they can re-ignite their rivalry, only this time in heels instead of running shoes hehe x
stacy C
2023-11-21 09:54:33 +0000 UTCMesdames, let me assure both of you that I wasnβt being sarcastic. My intentions were merely harmless and humorous. I would never be malicious towards any user on this site, and the use of sarcasm would fall under that definition for me. So please accept my apologies for any misunderstandings caused.
Robertlouis
2023-11-17 12:00:09 +0000 UTCBrutal. Will the spark ignite? It doesn't have to, but maybe it could, would make it that much more interesting to see it doused. πΏ
Thomas Tolliver
2023-11-16 22:12:01 +0000 UTCwoow
Stormfries
2023-11-16 16:21:48 +0000 UTCThey say great minds often think alike, my muse. And I definitely see shades (a few) of my own Dr. Delilah Crowe and her sissy daughter Summer Chastity Croweβ’ in Olivia. It is my fondest wish to see Olivia, Connie and all the toys/companions/prototypes deliver vengeance to their tormentors. Unlike Olivia, Summer has all the wealth and family Platinum Star family connections to exact her revenge. Meanwhile, her spirit is torn so far between the desire for revenge & her devoutly Catholic good girl's duty to forgive her tormentors...and to help rescue the "girls" from Xu's "clean-up" protocol which is straight up mass-murder.
Alex From the Tri-Cities
2023-11-16 11:58:16 +0000 UTCDark and wonderful! My friends, our beautiful, brilliant artist never disappoints.
Autumn Rovers
2023-11-16 11:11:08 +0000 UTCMore Olivia :) she's beautiful and numbness will eventually pass away so Trent dude... you better hide... if you do not want to loose something and gain something else... πβ£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈ
Maggie Heels
2023-11-16 09:51:09 +0000 UTCI agree, Jacob. Variety is the spice of life and I think the darker stories are good as 'grounding' for some of the lighter tales. Thank you!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-11-16 07:00:19 +0000 UTCI kinda like the darker stories im ngl.. itβs good to have a mix and the entire idea of forced feminization in the first place doesnβt always entail sunshine and rainbows
Jay
2023-11-16 06:57:12 +0000 UTCYes, Olivia's story - so far - is definitely a tragedy. Second Dawn, for all of Mr. Xu's pretense, is evil. For every 'Jill' or 'Holly' who can (slowly) adapt to their new gender, there's a dozen others who either can't or aren't given the tools / support to even try because their discomfort is the point. But Olivia's story isn't over. She'll be around when Phase 9 happens. π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-11-16 06:55:35 +0000 UTCI donβt know why, but this story makes me more sad than any of the others. It is simply so unjust, to the extent that her beauty is almost irrelevant. Even if she canβt exact revenge, Iβd really like to see somebody do it on her behalf. Sequel, Emory? Or at the very least a useful ally for Jill. xx
Robertlouis
2023-11-16 06:51:17 +0000 UTC
