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Brooke's Transition & Story

Thank you to everyone who voted! 😊 The winner of the poll was:

The Hidden Genius - Paul was a computer prodigy, gifted with an exceptional intellect. He was originally recruited by Clinic 12 to work on the advanced algorithm project. Unfortunately, once the algorithm was activated, it was determined that Paul was the perfect candidate for procurement...

I really enjoyed writing and creating the art for Brooke's story. She's quickly becoming one of my new favorites. 

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Comments

ESPECIALLY if you're the one creating it LOL

Emory Ahlberg

They don't lie!

Emory Ahlberg

Those hips... 😮

Lampy

Never trust technology.....even if you're the one creating it hehe x

stacy C

You've nailed it! The irreversible nature of the transformation is indeed a significant part of Davis's method. It's a stark reminder of the control exerted by Second Dawn and the finality of the transformation. Even if Brooke escapes, she'll never be the same.

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Gemma, for your lovely comment! I'm so happy to hear Brooke's beauty and journey resonated with you. It's a balancing act to portray the vulnerability, resilience, and beauty of these characters as they navigate their new lives. 💖

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you very much, Jam! It was really fun to bring her backstory to life!!!

Emory Ahlberg

💖💖💖 LOL - Thank you, Nina! So many characters to protect... and so many others to punish!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Maggie! 💖 No, feminization doesn't make you dumb. She's still a genius...just with boobs! You may be right about Jill... 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you! 💖💖💖 I'm so happy you got so much story out of it... that was definitely the goal. Josie definitely has a lot to live for... Her son has accepted his new "mom" whole-heartedly. But, yes, sadly - the toys are not allowed to reintegrate into society in any way. They're strictly property.

Emory Ahlberg

🤣 Hope everything worked out, Fin!

Emory Ahlberg

Must go to the emergency room...priapism...

findesiecle

ih, meant to add, recognition of the Davis blueprint of castration as part of the process of breaking down the resistance and hope of these former men as they are confronted by irreversibility of them being ever able to reclaim their masculine status ever again.

Gemma

How beautiful and pretty is Brooke. Your gift for creating beautiful and cute girls is amazing. Your images you capture both the sense their sense vulnerability they experience following their forced feminisation as well as the challenges they encounter around adapting and adjusting to their new lives as pretty girls.

Gemma

wow!!! Emori 🥰🥰 I love you!! you are great 😘😘😘 Broke has to keep going!! she is beautiful !! Thank you!!!!! 😍

jam

Like the equally accursed Thalmor in Elder Scrolls, the Second Dawn must be utterly destroyed.

Alex From the Tri-Cities

Brooke’s gotta survive this crazy world 😭😭

Nina

A terrific vignette, Emory, which concentrates the process, and the cold evil, of Second Dawn into six brilliant renders. And you have surpassed yourself with Brooke’s facial expressions. The mix of beauty and vulnerability throughout is superb, and the look on her face in frame 4 in particular is heartbreaking. And she is stunningly beautiful. A great addition to the Jack and Jill canon, which promises plenty of narrative scope for the future. Bravo!

Robertlouis

WOOOOOOOOW ❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️ Brooke is awesome and gorgeous... and still IT genius... feminization didn't eradicate those skills from her mind right? So... She definitely can be very helpful to "grandplan" of Jill for total takeover of everything and everybody on the island... 😁

Maggie Heels

My darling muse Emory, although this was only 6 pages, ready it felt more like one of Jill's "Phases" or "Holly's Tale", meaning 198-500 pages. You never fail to hit the ball right out of the park, as you always do. While I want ALL of them to succeed and be freed from the accursed Second Dawn, in the end I will root for Brooke. Please don't be mad at me for that. Way I see it, Josie's son gives her an unfair advantage in both keeping her grounded and giving her something to protect and fight for, whereas the same cannot be said for Jill, Brooke and even Holly and Janelle. I assume those "girls" who are "handled" by Davis and his goons never get to be reintroduced anywhere or even see sunlight at all as long as the Second Dawn still exists, are they, my dearest muse?

Alex From the Tri-Cities

Brooke vs Josie, who do you choose? 😉

Emory Ahlberg

I am rooting so hard for Brooke. 💕

Alyson Greaves


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