Half Sisters - Episode 32
Added 2023-05-14 21:56:54 +0000 UTCNikki confronts both her (shrinking) present and her past (sins)...
24 pages in the next episode of Half Sisters! YAY!
I'm so enjoying writing / art-ing Season 2 and I hope you are, too. The evolution of Zach and Nikki over these episodes has been really satisfying. But they still have a long way to go!
I can't wait to hear your thoughts! π
Comments
This one was fun at the beginning . Then it was sad. Then heartwarming and sad. Then funny. "Like 100% homo". Lol.
Jessica Thence
2025-02-16 17:53:37 +0000 UTCHi Gemma! Of course. My email address is emoryahlberg@gmail.com π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-30 16:31:16 +0000 UTCHi Emory, i donβt want to take up too much of this comment section of your patron site. I am wondering if you have a site or address in which I could provide more expansive comment and musing on Half Sisters.
Gemma
2023-05-28 22:06:26 +0000 UTCAww, I'm really happy you're enjoying their story, Estacia. These two are on a long journey, that's for sure. Where does it lead? We'll see. π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-28 04:43:45 +0000 UTCπ Too much cognitive dissonance, I guess! "That girl is hot but she's not me even though I know she's me...!"
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-28 04:42:50 +0000 UTCAww, I think you're right, Bowie. Zach certainly seems to have a better disposition than Nikki when it comes to this... but Zach's father seems even more militant when it comes to signs of femininity in his son than even Nikki's dad.
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-28 04:42:09 +0000 UTCQuite possibly you're right and her boobs! And I think Nikki doesn't see her butt because she's chooses not to look back there. She's too concerned about what she's losing up front than to worry about what she's GAINING in the back. π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-28 04:41:04 +0000 UTCWell, I wouldn't say it was very okay since Scott/Sandy had to threaten him to get him to reign in the other football players. Jessica definitely seems upset about something, though!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-28 04:39:46 +0000 UTCI'm enjoying their bonding a great deal as well, ckarya. π Jessica showing up is definitely tossing a wrench into whatever plans they had before -- and she doesn't seem happy!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-28 04:38:17 +0000 UTCAwww. π³ Thank you so much, Zoe!!!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-28 04:33:01 +0000 UTCI definitely agree. Whatever sins Nikki may have committed as Nick, nothing can justify what has happened to her.
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-28 04:32:42 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Gemma! Yeah, she really does look quite cute in that image. π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-28 04:28:52 +0000 UTCThank you, Ella! I experienced the same feelings while writing this episode, so I accomplished my mission by transferring them to you. π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-28 03:48:15 +0000 UTCπππ You're welcome!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-28 03:40:06 +0000 UTCAlmost certainly not -- at least, not very willingly! Making Nikki out of Nicholas took a lot of money. That's not an investment he'll let go of lightly. π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-28 03:39:53 +0000 UTCI really appreciate that, Gemma! I wish they could be longer too, but my poor brain can only churn out so much at a time without exploding! I try to make each chapter count while maintaining the quality you all deserve. I don't usually use thought bubbles since I go for a sort of "cinematic" style. Nikki's (very) confused thoughts and feelings will definitely surface, though. Usually, I put these in her emails to Scott / Sandy. Nikki's inner turmoil and her growing connection with Zach will definitely lead to more than a few of these, haha. π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-27 05:55:54 +0000 UTCWow! Big compliment on the renders, Maggei! Thanks so much! I'm glad Nikki's expressions are feeling realistic. I work hard on those in particular, tbh. Isn't it thrilling watching her slowly come around? And oh, the distractions she creates...c'est magnifique! π I can't officially confirm or deny any "friends with benefits" possibilities, but the journey ahead has plenty of twists, turns, and perhaps some steamy surprises. P.S.2: Don't worry, we'll get you a box of tissues for those emotional moments! ππ§»
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-27 05:52:44 +0000 UTCAw, thank you so much, Nina!!! π I promise not to leave you hanging for too long. Nikki's journey is far from over. She's got more growing (both literally and figuratively) to do. π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-27 05:50:12 +0000 UTCThank you, Alyson! Haha, sorry not sorry for the emotional rollercoaster ride! Poor Nikki does is going through a lot, but at least she's got Zach by her side to help her through it all. That's definitely not something she would've imagined thinking only a month ago but she's actually beginning to change! Yes, it's as slow as a snail stuck in molasses, but it's happening! π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-27 05:20:16 +0000 UTCThis is such a cute love story with these two. Nikki is my favorite! Zach has really won me over this last few times weβve seen him. π₯°
Estacia
2023-05-18 19:45:16 +0000 UTCWhy didn't Nikki just look in the mirror when he was trying to make his 'thing' work again haha x
stacy C
2023-05-17 22:35:49 +0000 UTCYes, thatβs Jessica β last scene with Sandy in Season 1.
Emory Ahlberg
2023-05-16 20:30:41 +0000 UTCShould I know who the girl was at the end?
Emily Morgan
2023-05-16 20:01:28 +0000 UTCIt is a shame that Zach and Nikki cannot change places. I think Zach would be very happy as the girl in love with Nikki. And Nikki would prefer to be the macho male.
Bowie897
2023-05-16 14:14:42 +0000 UTCYes cliffhanger with Jessica was for me surprise! I look forward to continuing the story.
Wojtek
2023-05-16 12:33:28 +0000 UTCfrom the looks of the nipples, the boobs look like they will fill out a little more. How does Nikki not see her butt!! great back view Emory!!
animalmusic
2023-05-16 02:04:23 +0000 UTCMore bonding :D ...and cliffhanger - anything could happen next... Jessica's previous meet with Zach went ok(ish) and Nikki was mentioned - so... hopeful?
punarotta
2023-05-15 23:26:08 +0000 UTCYou mean Holly, poor thing. Breast implants and Brazilian Butt Lift, those should really come off. Xu and Hatcher really disfigured her.
Female-Bosmer-Always
2023-05-15 15:46:53 +0000 UTCAs always a fantastic episode! I like the camaraderie between these two and that they are untangling their problems...now they will have to untangle another one according to the last page - step by step..... PS: Em, Nikki's breasts are perfect! don't make them too much bigger, we already have a fair share of busty ones hehehehe.π
ckarya
2023-05-15 13:24:39 +0000 UTCI love these kids. Imagine I put that neighborhood tree meme here.
Zoe Storm
2023-05-15 04:25:01 +0000 UTCEmory, my muse. Another masterpiece of suspense and emotions but heartwarming and heart wrenching. Believe me, I'm all about having the wicked pay in spades for their sins (Xu, Davis, Hatcher, Mike, Anton, Yasir, Holly's uncle) but poor Nikki already paid in full.
Female-Bosmer-Always
2023-05-15 03:24:48 +0000 UTCAgree with MaggieHeels in image 17 Nikki looks so vulnerable and real, but my favourite image is 22, just before the hug, Nikki looking up at Zach
Gemma
2023-05-15 02:52:45 +0000 UTCA whole mix of emotions in this one. I got anxious with Nikki, then it felt cute with Zachβs story, and to finish, I got very curious. Great chapter!
Ella Cherry
2023-05-15 01:29:55 +0000 UTCI wonder if zach father Will let Nikki escape her future as zachs girlfriend . What Will he do π
Digi2288
2023-05-15 00:53:39 +0000 UTCThanks again Emory
Gemma
2023-05-15 00:27:29 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. I wish the chapters were longer. Iβm just sinking into the flow of story, counting down each of the pages, wishing for more. Love how Nikki is looking. Wondering if there will be thought bubbles which capture her βconfusing thoughts, feelings, outside her bravado , that she experiences whilst feeling Zachs embrace.by
Gemma
2023-05-15 00:27:03 +0000 UTCOKAY I need definitely much more time to process last photo... (yes from now on I'll call Emory's renders photos...) OMG page 17 face expression is sooo real... Nikki very slowly is realizing her karma... that's good... and damn... why on every photo with her in it I need to read captions slower and couple times? She's constantly distracting meee β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈ P.S. I can't wait when "friends" will change into "friends with benefits" :} P.S.2 on photos 20-21 cried like a lil baby...
Maggie Heels
2023-05-15 00:06:15 +0000 UTCAhhhhhhhhhhhh the end!!!!! Emory!!!! Donβt leave me hanging like this πππ amazing work as always and i really hope we can see nikki grow more, itβs been interesting as heck!
Nina
2023-05-14 23:47:03 +0000 UTCthis episode just transferred Nikkiβs heart problems to me it was all so sad and then so sweet and then so ARGH
Alyson Greaves
2023-05-14 22:10:29 +0000 UTC
