Half Sisters - Episode 30 + Bonus Pinup

Good plot development in this bottle episode haha.

Jessica Thence

Thank you! But do you mean Page 20? Looks correct to me.

Emory Ahlberg

Omagathief

Thanks, Nina! I'm so glad you're enjoying the character growth and the dynamic between Nikki and Zach. I'm definitely exploring Nikki becoming more comfortable with her new-found femininity. And yes, her father is definitely an obstacle in her path towards self-discovery. 😡 This whole arc is about her figuring that out.. As for mom... don't worry, she's not gone forever!

Emory Ahlberg

Love love love the growth from Nikki here and seeing Zach slowly try to break down those insane macho walls she’s got so built up. Incredible story telling Emory and the art is still gorgeous!!! I do hope she eventually ditches her dad or he figures out he’s an asshole. Hey maybe a mom arc??? I’m rooting for it

Nina

That makes sense, thanks

Gemma

She'll hate it SO MUCH - I can't wait. 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Quite likely, Gemma! We'll be switching back to Sandy after Nikki's current 'situation' is over -- she has a lot to deal with, too!

Emory Ahlberg

Cheerleader outfit pinup when?

Thomas Tolliver

alpha in the relationship whether he wants to be or not.

Gemma

Emory thank you for your feedback on my comments. Further in the vein of Nikki having to confront aspects of his new reality and status I am wondering if Sandy will also encounter his own adjustments to his new status and role. How, even in a lesbian relay with Jessica, Sandy soon discovered even in these types of relationships he is theweaker, more submissive ‘beta’ to Jessica’s ‘

Gemma

New nickname for Zach from Nikki??? -Hey why my persnal jar opener is late again? -Haha very funny Nikki (blowing a kiss)

MaggieHeels

Bosmer, thank you for your kind words! It makes my heart swell to know you're enjoying Zach and Nikki's story. 💖 As for them joining forces with 'others' to take on Second Dawn, well, that's an interesting idea indeed! I won't give too much away, but I will say that life is full of unexpected twists, and anything is possible. Let's see how our lovely duo tackles the challenges ahead and if they might find some allies along the way. 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, sniggy! That makes me really happy to hear.

Emory Ahlberg

Hey, Sara! Thanks for enjoying the fun and loving the story! What you're imagining could happen! It's all about exploring and embracing who they really are, and who knows where that might lead? 😉 As for Nick/Nikki potentially realizing his own repressed feelings and embracing his new self, that would be a fascinating twist. Let's see how these characters' journeys continue to unfold, and how their newfound bonds develop. 💕

Emory Ahlberg

Oh, Gemma, you've got some great ideas cooking there! Nikki experiencing a reality check around her loss of strength would definitely be an eye-opening moment, and I can totally see it happening with something as simple as a stubborn jar. Incredible! As for feeling triggered by Zach's manly strength, that could add another layer of complexity to their relationship. Nikki will have to navigate her changing feelings and reactions as her new self, which is honestly such an exciting and, at times, challenging journey. You've got me feeling all inspired! 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Ella! Writing it has been a real treat for me. 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Gemma, your excitement is contagious. I'm so happy you're enjoying the open-ended possibilities between Nikki and Zach. Their future together is just brimming with potential, and I can't wait to explore more of it. As for the 'apparatus' (wink wink) mystery - stay tuned!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Gemma! 💖

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, Andrew, I'm so happy you're enjoying the story! You're right, trusting Zach is a HUGE step for Nikki, and it's definitely setting her in a better direction. You've got a great point about needing the truth from her father. Who knows what revelations could come from that conversation - on both sides!

Emory Ahlberg

Oh, Maggie, you romantic soul! 💕 I can totally see why you'd picture that scene – it would be such a swoon-worthy moment, right? Who doesn't love a good, slow-burn romance blossoming from a deep friendship? While I can't promise we'll reach chapter 300, I can guarantee Nikki and Zach's journey will be filled with personal growth, self-discovery, and maybe even some surprises! 😉 Keep those positive vibes coming, and let's see where our lovely characters take us!

Emory Ahlberg

I just adore the enthusiasm you have for Nikki and Zach! You're absolutely right, these pages were suuuuper important for Nikki's growth. We all need that reality check sometimes, right? I couldn't agree more that it's time for Nikki to embrace her inner strength and start building a fabulous new life, filled with love and friendship. And you already know that Nikki is a total hottie, just wait 'til she realizes it too! 😍 And, yes, I hinted at past history. 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Oh, Maggie, you just know how to pick the juiciest parts of the story, don't you? 😍 Seriously, can we all just take a moment to appreciate that these two are finally getting the chance to grow and learn from each other? You are sooo right about Nikki needing that little push to start her journey of redemption and becoming a better person I can't help but feel a little giddy at the thought of them going on a date together! Besties or more, I think they're going to be an unstoppable power couple in the making. And girl, Nikki is definitely still figuring out how to flaunt that hotness of hers - she'll get there in time! 😉

Emory Ahlberg

This is so fun Em! I love that you introduced gay elements with Nick and Scott, I love the idea of them embarking on their male attractions in parallel and sharing that experience alongside their feminisation. It’s just super hot. I desperately hope Nick starts getting boy crazy and realises he was such an asshole because he had deep rooted repressed homosexuality and embraces the power of being a sexy sissy with tits. Imagine him and Scott getting gang banged by the football team heheheh.

Sara Dune Tone

Perhaps Nikki should go in the pool before removing the cage. That way Nikki can blame the "shrinkage" on the cold water!!!

Bowie897

Hanging out for continuance if this story. I hope Nikki encounters a reality check around his loss strength when when , for examples he has to rely on Zach opening a jar with ease that he can’t budge. In relation to this,Nikki’s surprise around feeling triggered by Zach’s display of his manly strength

Gemma

Hi again Emory,

Gemma

a truly amazing twist. can't wait!

sniggy02

I definitely like to watch the evolution of this friendship!

Ella Cherry

you have left open so many intriguing possibilities in what could occur between Niki and Zach. I am also intrigued to find out if Nikki is in for a shocking surprises when the apparatus covering his genitalia is finally opened

Gemma

Fantastic Emory,

Gemma

Emory, my darling muse, it seems that you never fail to reach new heights of brilliance. I absolutely love this and can't wait to see Zach and Nikki blossom together. Are there any plans on having them join forces with "others" to help bring down the monstrous Second Dawn?

Female-Bosmer-Always

Great story. Trusting Zach is a good direction for her. Now, if she would trust her mother and not her father, she would be on the right road for a new life. She needed to hear from the jerks, now all she needs is the true from her father.

Andre

Oooh! Which part, Autumn? 😊

Emory Ahlberg

i cant wait to see them together... and TOGETHER!!

Autumn Rovers

WOW thats taking a twist i didnt see! :) VERY exciting! :)

Autumn Rovers

Pizza and chill? 😋

Emory Ahlberg

Friends?... Perhaps "Friends With Benefits" after some pizza!!!

Bowie897

Those two would make a nice couple. I think we are cheering for them to end up together. I agree with Zoe's comments, they need each other. The pinup image of Nikki is breathtaking, she looks absolutly gorgeous!

Pelicanboss

Sooo this was chapter 30 right? Why am I imagining already a chapter number 300 where after very long and close friendship Nikki and Zach both are coming to realization that they're bi and share long passionate kiss? ❣️❣️❣️

MaggieHeels

I really like the friendship and the team these two are going to form! They have a lot to lean on and help each other to fight against their "beloved" daddies...plus they will be a great cover for each other in the public eye so they can find their own partner in their homophobic town. There's some great material to develop the story and let's not forget Sandy, Jess... and Josh. You left us a good little crumb Em, Nick and Zach must have been good friends as kids, before Nick's dad taught him how to be a man....

ckarya

Nikki and Zach go on a date ❣️ Nikki AND Zach will be on a date ❣️ Nikki and Zach will be at least BFFs ❣️ WOOOW pages 13 and 15 are sooo important... YES Nikki no matter how harsh it was you needed to hear it from first hand... I would say "the seed of redemption was planted" and must be watered as much as possible... It is time Nikki... to finally leave your past behind you and start to discover your knew assets to be strong again... but in different things... be an actual friend to others then this will come back to you as well. I guarantee it to you ;) (Emory ;) ) P.S. Nikki you still have no idea how hot you are girl... and Zach... please don't fuck it up...

Maggie Heels

Seriously I love these two, I'm so fucking glad they're getting along. They honestly need each other as friends.

Zoe Storm

Emory im screaming

Zoe Storm