Half Sisters - Episode 27
Added 2023-02-01 14:09:24 +0000 UTCNikki puts on her game face (lipstick, mascara, and all) and tackles the toughest dinner of her life...
Hey everyone!
In this episode, Nick / Nikki is forced to get ready for dinner with her dad, Zach, and the insidious Hutchinson. It's a nerve-wracking experience, but Nikki is determined not to show any fear. Do you think she'll be able to get through the evening without breaking down?
This episode was sooo fun to write and the art was really challenging. Hopefully the results speak for themselves. I'm working hard to make the episodes as photoreal as possible! I'm especially proud of the exterior shot in this one (outside Nikki's home) because those have always been so difficult!
Thanks for your continued support and I can't wait to hear what you think! π
Comments
She consumes a LOT of sports lol
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-11 05:29:31 +0000 UTCIsn't she though? Thank you, Jess!
Emory Ahlberg
2024-06-11 05:29:13 +0000 UTCI also loved the foreshadowing in slide 5. I also noticed the game on the TV in the background changed from the Astros to Royals-Twins! She could've changed the channel. Or perhaps she is watching a highlight show!
Jessica Thence
2024-04-26 14:36:44 +0000 UTCI love Nikki. I love the mindfuck of the athlete-turned-cute girl. It is so cute that she is actually trying and she uses all those boy terms still. And she IS cute as a button.
Jessica Thence
2024-04-26 14:35:46 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Robert! You have such a keen eye for detail. Nikki has definitely switched into a "softer" version of her personality for this dinner. How much is for show and how much is genuine? That's a question with a deep, complex answer that Nikki herself may take a long time to figure out... As for Zach, I can confirm that this is only the SECOND time his sunglasses are off! It's a brief moment, but the first is in the warehouse when Nikki is first being fitted with her "device." He takes them off when his dad exits for a few minutes and Zach and Nikki exchange a few honest words. π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-08 05:22:11 +0000 UTCThank you, Bell! Aw, Zach might indeed make a pretty girl. An alternate reality pinup image might be in "her" future! Poor Nikki is already struggling with so many emotions that she doesn't understand. She'd be even more confused if she starts to have feelings for Zach! Of course, same for Zach since he's only into guys... We'll see what happens!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-08 05:13:54 +0000 UTCMe too! Nikki has a lot of growing to do, and it's so fun to watch. Thank you!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-08 05:09:16 +0000 UTCThank you, Kirsten!!! π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-08 05:08:34 +0000 UTCAw, Nina, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Nikki's transformation in this episode was sooo much fun to write and make images for! She may not be feeling any more comfortable with her femininity, but she certainly looks beautiful. Mom's makeup lessons must've been a success! Zach and Nikki make an interesting pair, don't they? Two people who have reasons to dislike each other but who are both stuck in this crazy situation together. We'll just have to wait and see how things unfold between them! I have many plans. π And thank you for commenting on the quality. I'm really trying to bring it to the next level. π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-08 05:07:54 +0000 UTCThanks so much, Pelican. Those images you chose are some of my favorites, as well. π Nikki's body is definitely still changing, and she's had SOME comportment training from Holly back on the island... With her makeup and clothing on point, she is absolutely stunning,
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-08 05:04:03 +0000 UTCThank you, Digi! Yes, seems like that premium Second Dawn HRT is worth the cost! π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-08 05:01:39 +0000 UTCAnd the man caught her! π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-08 04:36:15 +0000 UTCHmmm. All very interesting. Nikkiβs vocabulary has dropped right away from all the macho bravado of her exchanges with Scott/Sandy and unconsciously moved into a distinctly feminine register. Not only that, her movements, thanks to your subtle art, Emory, so sensitive, are infinitely more feminine too. Finally, I think the final frame may show us two things for the first time in the entire story: Zach without his sunglasses, which have concealed what heβs thinking, and what looks like a genuine and spontaneous smile. The next chapter promises to be a humdinger!
Robertlouis
2023-02-07 05:58:22 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Maggie! Yeah... Nikki really knocked it out of the park with this look. She's not happy, though. Why does she have to be so good at everything... even being beautiful!? π Episode 1,234 might be a tad generous for Nikki... she's that stubborn! LOL
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-07 05:53:43 +0000 UTCπ at your "receiving" comment! Maybe Zach is just happy he caught Nikki so she didn't break her neck... Although that IS an awfully big smile... π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-07 05:52:03 +0000 UTCI agree completely on both counts. π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-07 05:50:12 +0000 UTCOooh, she'd absolutely rock an updo, Jack. Especially in an evening gown, I think!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-07 05:49:34 +0000 UTCThere's a lot to love about her, ckarya! More and more every day, in fact, if you count her butt. π π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-07 05:47:33 +0000 UTCAwww. Thank you so much, Michelle! That really means a lot to me. π I'm always trying to take my storytelling and art to the next level. Thank you for commenting!
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-07 05:46:42 +0000 UTCThank you, Zoe! Yes, I tried my best to make that clear. That's why we have a close-up of Zach's face when he says hello to Nikki's dad. He's practically snarling at him! He hates both dads, honestly.
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-07 05:45:01 +0000 UTCYay! πππππ (her leg in the air, hehe)
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-07 05:44:05 +0000 UTCThank you for your lovely comment, AurΓ©lie. I promise the story will definitely be continuing for quite some time. As for Zach's assertiveness, we shall see! π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-02-07 05:43:24 +0000 UTCI can see it in Zachary's Face. I think he would make a beautiful Kari. And I wouldn't mind an alternate reality where Zach and his father are both turned into women. BUT for some reason Zach seems to be the only one happy about the prospect of dating men. Or even better....Nikki finds herself thinking Zach is cute and struggles with the new emotions they bring. and to her surrpise, Zach isn't the only cute guy on campus
Emily Morgan
2023-02-02 23:20:51 +0000 UTCI love the Niki Storyline
Mzlipstick
2023-02-02 14:17:26 +0000 UTCExcellent episode
Kirsten Roberts
2023-02-02 12:07:11 +0000 UTCNormally, I start my comments with congrats and then get right to the story but good god Emory! The art on these chapters is SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! On your comment about the exterior of the house, wow! Just wow! I didnβt even think about it as not being a created image! Also, Nikkiβs face is so pretty in makeup π₯Ί i wish she liked it more. I totally get the desire to not wear and, the genuine, dysphoria but still! Nikki pretty! Sheβs by far one of my most favorite of your characters! Just so feisty! Also, Zach catching her!!!?? *fans self* such a sexy scene!! The little smirk and everything! Ahhhhhhhh! I know those two probably wonβt do anything, but you know, iβm not against it if they do ;) Iβd find it odd if Zach tried anything genuinely and wasnβt forced to because of him being attracted to men, but idk if heβd make an exception for our girl I have to emphasize this, you are SO good at your craft! Somehow, I swear you put out something even higher quality update. I loved it Emory!!!!!!!!!
Nina
2023-02-02 03:29:26 +0000 UTCI'm loving it, excelente! Two captions I particularly liked: page 8, 2nd panel, Nikki says "why do I have to be good at everything". He's admiring and liking his girl form, he knows he's, better she's beautiful. Then page 17, look at her feet positions, really girly, not how a regular guy would move his legs and feet. Slowly but surely she's becoming a girl unconsciously. Not to mention page 7, panel 1, she look so hot in that dress and in that pose, very feminine.
Pelicanboss
2023-02-01 23:21:40 +0000 UTCThe hormones are doing the job fantastic , and man that dress terrific , those nikki legs can turn zach hetero for sure hahaha
Digi2288
2023-02-01 22:16:58 +0000 UTCIt's so nice, Nick-ki is very cute. She just caught the eye of a man, apparently!
Erica Rost
2023-02-01 18:21:09 +0000 UTCNikki looks amazing in that dress, she might deserve a pinup soon π€π
GayVampire69
2023-02-01 17:07:32 +0000 UTCI have been wondering if gay Zach would still be attracted to Nikkis' newly feminized form. He seems rather happy with what he is holding in his hands in that last panel. the last line seemed a bit off, because if one of these two quartbacks is going to wind up being a receiver, I don't think it is Zach
mdaily
2023-02-01 17:05:07 +0000 UTCShe is so beautiful that even if she put on a potato sack, it would look like a designer dress on her. She is sooo gorgeousβ£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈ I hope Niki and Zach will stay friends in "far" future... far because at this pace Nikki will start liking herself at episode number 1234 ;) P.S. who knows how many episodes "The Bold and the Beautiful" tv series had ? :}
MaggieHeels
2023-02-01 16:25:28 +0000 UTCOnly svelte lass in the Second Dawnverse. Can't wait for when she does up hair in an updo.
Jack Dawson
2023-02-01 16:16:52 +0000 UTCAs a quick comment, I am fucking in love with Nikki!!! ππ
ckarya
2023-02-01 15:06:26 +0000 UTCOh my God Emory, what the hell have you done !!!!! This has got to be the best tg captioned story i've ever seen. Nikki looks soooo hot in that dress. looking forward to the next instalment already.
michelle wills
2023-02-01 14:52:50 +0000 UTCGod, I love how it's super clear Zach HATES having to do this at least as much as Nikki does. They're two kindred spirits, a pair of good kids at heart with shitty dads.
Zoe Storm
2023-02-01 14:20:43 +0000 UTCThis dropped while Iβm eating lunch so for now Iβll limit my reaction to: π³π³π³π³π³
Alyson Greaves
2023-02-01 14:16:06 +0000 UTCso exciting story, and superb artistically ! please continue this lovely story, Hoping around my kinks that his/her boyfriend will continue to be assertive...
AurΓ©lie Trave
2023-02-01 14:14:26 +0000 UTC
