Homecoming - Episode 10 + Bonus Pinup
Added 2022-11-21 14:42:45 +0000 UTCChris comes to terms with "Kris" and Kayla visits the park...
The bad news? This episode was late. Sorry!
The good news? The episode is 26 pages long with a bonus pinup and I tested some new techniques.
Chris's story is evolving and delving into the psychology of his character has been really rewarding. I hope you like the episode. I can't wait to hear your thoughts!
Comments
Awww! Thank you, Jess! That means a lot to me!
Emory Ahlberg
2024-01-28 21:49:38 +0000 UTCNo one in TG fiction tells real stories like you Emory. Like actual literary stories. Well done.
Jessica Thence
2024-01-28 18:42:54 +0000 UTCThank you, Nina! Writing the revelation about Kayla and Ben was honestly a bit hard because I've been loving the relationship between Chris and Kayla. It felt like tossing a bomb into a loving couple that is just beginning to heal. Is Chris a pawn? You make some interesting points! And we have seen them muse about whether they're really free, their fear of leaving the apartment, etc. And, yeah, Chris definitely has a form of PTSD and some...other...issues, as we see in Episode 11. These will definitely be important themes to explore in future episodes. As for how the relationships between Chris, Kayla, and Ben will strain and how Bella will react to the detectives, you'll just have to keep reading to find out! ๐ Thank you again for your support and your amazing comments. They mean a lot to me!
Emory Ahlberg
2022-12-07 07:43:45 +0000 UTCThanks, Stacy! Sounds like you're beginning to doubt Chris and his story! If you're beginning to doubt him, imagine how Kayla must feel. ๐ I promise that all will be revealed in due time. In the meantime, please keep sharing your theories. ๐
Emory Ahlberg
2022-12-07 07:36:00 +0000 UTCI'm glad I didn't do that to him, Maggie! That would have been very sad and unfair for poor Chris / Kris. ๐
Emory Ahlberg
2022-12-07 07:31:47 +0000 UTCThank you so much for your comments and theories about the episode! I'm thrilled to see that you're enjoying the story and the new developments. It's fascinating to see how you're piecing together the clues and coming up with your own theories about what might happen next. I can't wait for you to see what's coming next in the story, and I'm sure you'll be surprised by some of the twists and turns we have in store. As for your theories about Ben and Kayla, I can't say anything for sure, but I can assure you that all will be revealed in due time. Keep reading and stay tuned for more! I'm excited to see where the story takes us next. ๐ Thanks again for your support and feedback, ckarya and Maggie! I love, love reading them and do so as soon as they're posted (even if it takes me awhile to reply sometimes) ๐
Emory Ahlberg
2022-12-07 07:31:11 +0000 UTCIt's certainly true that we haven't gotten a clear look at Bella's face yet. ๐
Emory Ahlberg
2022-12-07 07:25:44 +0000 UTCI'm glad you're enjoying it, Ella! There are plenty of surprises still to come.
Emory Ahlberg
2022-12-07 07:13:57 +0000 UTCThanks for your kind words, ckarya! I really love Kayla's look and that was one of the times I feel as if I've gotten close to photorealism. ๐ The plot is definitely thickening, so stay tuned!
Emory Ahlberg
2022-12-07 07:13:08 +0000 UTCThank you for your thoughtful words, France, as always! I'm excited to explore more of the mystery surrounding Chris / Kris and the other characters. ๐
Emory Ahlberg
2022-12-07 07:02:33 +0000 UTC๐ It's silly how proud I am of the "bonus pinup" which is actually my interpretation of Chrisโs nightmare.
Emory Ahlberg
2022-12-07 06:56:41 +0000 UTC๐
Emory Ahlberg
2022-12-07 06:55:18 +0000 UTCHoly shit! I shouldโve seen this coming but if iโll on knocked me from the side! Chris is being used! A pawn! They will look crazy because I donโt Bella makes anyone easy to find :( that would make a feminization ring too easy! I wonder how the two lovers relationships will strain as Chris comes back and along that point, is Chris even back? Or is it Kris? I wouldnโt be surprised for some PTSD episodes to just happen. And the way they react to their genitalia seems to leave some room for future discussion. How will Bella feel with detectives poking around! If this anything like Second Dawn, something tells me there may be a returning member with two plus ones soon!!
Nina
2022-12-04 07:31:40 +0000 UTCHmmm.....so is it all just made up? Is Chris still imprisoned and he's imagining what it would be like to be free? Did he actually do all this to himself and invented a crazy story to cover it up....and what happened before that pin up photo was taken LoL....lots to think about x
stacy C
2022-11-24 10:18:14 +0000 UTCJust Imagine if next page will be Chris/Kris waking up in his bed still at that place... and everything "after leaving it" was only a very, very long dream... Oh shit I hope not... (ok conversation between Kayla and Benjamin completely discard that but still...)
MaggieHeels
2022-11-22 15:25:37 +0000 UTCOhhh, CKARYA... I love your thoughts... because I'm late again you're ahead of me with this comprehensive insight for the current situation... I do not see the need to repeat after you so I'll only say that I am singing with my both hands everything what you said above... ๐๐๐โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ
MaggieHeels
2022-11-22 15:22:38 +0000 UTCJEEEEEEEEEEEEEESUS........... that idea is INSANEly good actually..... but it would bump this comic into top tier of "twilight zone" or "the outer limits" episodes........ way out of "classic simple forced fem stories"... OMGGGGG
MaggieHeels
2022-11-22 15:16:44 +0000 UTCWell, once again a very interesting chapter that opens up new plots of the story and introduces us to a new character, who, it seems, was Chris' best friend and who during the years of Chris' absence has been banging his fiancรฉe... and who is also the detective in charge of Chris' case. Nothing to reproach him and Kayla for their romance during Chris's absence, but... This is where Emory leaves us wondering if they are still together, if Benjamin is being honest or if he is hiding something shady with the investigation? At the moment, Ben's doubts seem normal to me, since it is clear that Chris's case is not normal and also from what it seems Chris is not collaborating much or at all with the investigation. ๐ค We have to go discovering the reason for Chris's silence (I imagine that for fear of Bella, although we still do not know what were the terms of his release, so we can only speculate on the reasons...). ๐ค๐ค Or maybe he doesn't trust Ben because of something we currently don't know..... (I seem to remember that before returning home Chris has been some time off out in the world and we don't know what he did during that time...) ๐ค๐ค๐ค We also need to know about Kayla's conflict: the loss of her fiancรฉ, leaving him for dead, new romance, the return of her totally changed fiancรฉ. Where does she stand and who is she going to fight for? ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค I hope and wish she will fight for Chris/Kris, helping her in her new life... ๐ฅฐ And we can't forget about BELLA and her fucking organization.... As they point out above, could Ben belong to it or be working for or with it, or even Ben be Bella herself? ๐คฏ Me with the info we have on Bella, I find it hard to believe that she works with any man due to her hatred and fanaticism, but.... Great job, Em! ๐
ckarya
2022-11-22 13:16:12 +0000 UTCInteresting concept! Someone with a motive to get rid of Kris. I like it.
Pelicanboss
2022-11-22 06:15:39 +0000 UTCWhat ifโฆwhat ifโฆโฆBen is Bella??? ๐ณ
Robertlouis
2022-11-22 05:39:47 +0000 UTCOh, getting better, and betterโฆ and better! Such a great story!
Ella Cherry
2022-11-21 18:51:53 +0000 UTCWow... I don't have time now, I'll leave my comment later, there's a lot of information and as usual, the plot gets complicated....๐ PS: I imagine it's those new touches you comment, but both Kris with her long hair, and especially in this episode Kayla in the park looks gorgeous and I love her facial expressions! ๐
ckarya
2022-11-21 17:00:47 +0000 UTCWe swim in full mystery to better know the facts or the reasons which underlie the history of Kris. Building suspense with another character coming on the scene only adds more pieces to the puzzle. We ask for more as if to find a solution to the induced disarray. My regards E.
France Day
2022-11-21 16:31:16 +0000 UTCThat final image ๐ฒ
Alyson Greaves
2022-11-21 15:00:26 +0000 UTCEmory you cow you ripped my heart out over lunch ๐ฅฐ Why must the plot thicken so? ๐ญ
Alyson Greaves
2022-11-21 14:57:14 +0000 UTCyeahh
Stormfries
2022-11-21 14:53:45 +0000 UTC
