Half Sisters - Episode 11 + Bonus Pinup
Added 2021-12-13 02:48:50 +0000 UTCNikki grapples with the changes to her body and what they mean for her future...
I loved writing and creating this one for you! Nikki is such a fun character, even though she can be a little bitchy at times, LOL. I really like the "sisterly" relationship she's developing with Sofia.
I can't wait to hear what you think of this episode. Also, this has maybe my favorite pinup of Nikki ever (so far)!
Comments
Thank you so, so much, Robert. That is so gratifying to hear, because that's exactly what I'm going for. Nikki is more than a little selfish and egotistical. When she was "all guy," this was probably seen as an asset, especially as a football player. But this trait is not considered attractive or appropriate for girls. Nikki will need to adapt. Of course, she can still manipulate people, but it won't be with muscles or intimidation anymore! Hehe.
Emory Ahlberg
2021-12-21 08:55:19 +0000 UTCI think Nikki is in for a long, difficult road to see if she can accept life as a woman...
Emory Ahlberg
2021-12-21 08:48:47 +0000 UTCRight!? Damn, gurl. 😀
Emory Ahlberg
2021-12-21 08:48:03 +0000 UTCI agree that pin up is smoking hot......those legs :-0 x
stacy C
2021-12-20 21:38:04 +0000 UTCFight her feminization to the day she dies? How cruel is that? Beyond my imagination. I would be enormously happy if she accepts her new form in the future.
MaggieHeels
2021-12-20 13:44:04 +0000 UTCThe psychology in your stories is deeper, and darker, than most, and Nikki and Sofia, while both defiant in their situations, react very differently. It’s going to be very interesting to see how their characters develop as the narrative shifts.
Robertlouis
2021-12-17 14:49:21 +0000 UTCOh i hope not. I hope that Nikki will hate and try and fight her feminization to the day she dies.
michelle wills
2021-12-14 21:37:02 +0000 UTCWater is soft but can cut through rock and Nikki is starting to soften up by water. It's just a matter of time and she will start to accept and even like her new body. This kind of character development is why I enjoy reading your stories so much. Excellent!
Pelicanboss
2021-12-14 15:18:26 +0000 UTC"both cute and hot AND sweaty and gross!" I can just about manage any two of four. Oh, to be a rendered character...
Alyson Greaves
2021-12-14 10:39:57 +0000 UTCYes! They are handling their changes very differently. Sofia / Scott may feel the battle is already over. After all, he has lost a precious part of his manhood forever. Nikki, on the other hand, still thinks he can win the war and take home the trophy -- his masculinity! We'll see how THAT turns out... LOL
Emory Ahlberg
2021-12-14 09:20:47 +0000 UTCThank you so, so much, Ella! Me too! Hehe. More to come!!!
Emory Ahlberg
2021-12-14 09:09:05 +0000 UTCYou are so kind, Aly. Thank you! Nikki is definitely more resistant to having a major personal journey than the other girls! Nicholas had a pretty great (and privileged!) life before he was transformed into Nikki. And now she has supposedly been changed into a sex toy for his rival. Yeesh! I think that ol' jock dude personality is likely to be around for a long, long time. And, again, thank you so much for noticing the hair! I worked an embarrassingly long time on the hair to make it looked messed up and sweaty. I also tried to make Nikki sweaty and a little "un-pretty" in those scenes. It is a fun challenge to render a character to be both cute and hot AND sweaty and gross!
Emory Ahlberg
2021-12-14 09:08:32 +0000 UTCThank you again!!! ❤️
Emory Ahlberg
2021-12-14 08:39:32 +0000 UTCWow, JS, thank you so much for your kind words. I really appreciate it! I'd love to explore more aspects of Sofia, Nikki, Jill and all the others' shared universe. I have plenty more ideas these characters and where their lives are going. We know that the society feminizing these young men is vast and powerful and has been in operation for many years. Who knows how many other young men have been converted? I also love the idea of a Jill "sequel" or "crossover" after her main story is finished. For obvious reasons she's still my favorite of the ladies and it will be hard to lose her when her story concludes. However, I think it would be nice for the readers to get more of her in some way...
Emory Ahlberg
2021-12-14 08:38:58 +0000 UTCI wonder what her mom would think about that outcome!
Emory Ahlberg
2021-12-14 08:29:05 +0000 UTCHahaha - Well, she's definitely the "hornier" sister at this point so that's possible. And I hope she will shrink, too... If she doesn't give Zach what he "wants" that's what'll happen!
Emory Ahlberg
2021-12-14 08:28:02 +0000 UTCI actually agree, dov. Unfortunately, there are limited options for modeling. Also, Nikki's dick is actually quite large (for now). Hopefully Nikki will "graduate" to a smaller one, hehe.
Emory Ahlberg
2021-12-14 08:26:18 +0000 UTCI really appreciate that, Michelle! Poor Nikki definitely doesn't appreciate her cage as much as we do, but I suspect it'll be on there for quite a while...
Emory Ahlberg
2021-12-14 08:25:12 +0000 UTCSisters are adapting quite differently :D Nikki is still very much a boy in girl's body - whereas Sofia seemed to be disgusted when suggested that she'd get intimate with a girl. Shame, she could be exactly the kind of girl Jessica likes ;)
punarotta
2021-12-13 18:02:31 +0000 UTCGreat episode! I loved to see Nikki’s part of the story!
Ella Cherry
2021-12-13 13:21:32 +0000 UTCNikki just being all, "Hey, dude: hot girl, into you. You should definitely fuck her," is hilarious. Practically every other character in this world has gone on a major personal journey and Nikki is still a jock dude. She's so fun to read. Also I know I talk about the visuals every episode but holy crap, the HAIR. Nikki's hair getting sweatier and messier as she exercises is such a great detail, and it made me scroll back up to look at the cafe scenes again. The hair in this comic is just super good. (And the environments continue to be fantastic.)
Alyson Greaves
2021-12-13 12:26:31 +0000 UTCThat is a lot I know but that is how much this new storyline excites me about the future. 🤩 Keep up the great work you're an amazing artist and storyteller. 👏👏👏
JS
2021-12-13 11:07:33 +0000 UTCI really liked this story arc. It really explores and connects characters, expands the universe, and even gives me hope that we can still keep getting stories from characters' whose main arcs have finished in this shared universe. I know Jill's story can't go on forever but in a larger universe like this we still can get chances to see her again, get a sequel, crossover, or even flash backs to part of her conversion that were glossed over.
JS
2021-12-13 11:06:42 +0000 UTCI can’t wait until Nikki has a vagina & starts making babies as the story progresses.
Rex
2021-12-13 10:55:09 +0000 UTCI can’t wait to see Nikki get all femme and interacting with boys… something tells me she’s the one who’ll end up being *really* boy crazy. I hope she gets fitted for smaller and smaller cages as the story progresses too! ❤️
Sara Dune Tone
2021-12-13 08:43:55 +0000 UTCEverything you do is great, however the chastity cage looks bulky and out of proportion.
dov
2021-12-13 07:46:37 +0000 UTCOh Emory this is in my opinion your best work to date. I love the fact that Nikki is locked up in her Cock Cage and seeing her naked, WOW. I would love to see much more of Nikki's chastity.
michelle wills
2021-12-13 07:07:15 +0000 UTCIt’s wonderful. Her mother is *snickers* giving her mother daughter tough love. Obviously, Nikki is being treated the same as so many young women. “What do you mean I have to wear a bra?!!!’ I don’t want too.”
Emily Morgan
2021-12-13 06:00:09 +0000 UTCEmory, that one was especially good. Oh NO, her mom is gonna cover up those magnificent boobs.
Rex
2021-12-13 04:02:51 +0000 UTC
