Thank you, Sky. I like to mix action, adventure, and intrigue into these tales. They're not as quick to the punch as some, but I like to think they enhance the transformation. :)
Emory Ahlberg
2019-02-20 23:34:27 +0000 UTC
I know! I'm nasty with the cliffhangers sometimes. ;)
Emory Ahlberg
2019-02-20 23:33:24 +0000 UTC
Thank you, Arte!!! Can't wait for you to read the whole thing.
Emory Ahlberg
2019-02-20 23:26:28 +0000 UTC
Liking but jumping over. Looks great!
Artemesia
2019-02-18 00:56:38 +0000 UTC
She is beautiful body transition to woman is near .Clitoris vagina will complete the change . Once there brain can embrace sexuality . Living a beautiful woman life style . Orgasms will return her lost pleasure during masturbation and sex with a man or woman .She will never want to return to a weak mans body . Now her breast nipples get erect hard causing nerve sensation pulsing to groin . Looking in mirror nude is a turn on for her . Love the way Emory is slowly advancing this story real thoughts desires changes some violence sexual contact .
Sky
2019-02-17 16:01:06 +0000 UTC
Reader is left to wonder is Jason shot ? or has shooter killed her . Is she dying mortally wounded bullet in her heart ? is she gasping for air in pain fearing dying ?