Storms in Paradise
Added 2019-01-16 10:00:02 +0000 UTCHey guys!
Some more Baltiebens and Delilens!
Just a few out of context phrases from future scenes. Goodness, it stressed me out to write/read this, I really can't stand couple fights, haha!
But it had do be done in the name of science and character exploration.
The thing about their relationship is that Delilah is "too emotional" while Baltazar is "too controlling".
Baltazar can get aggressively goal-oriented, going over his own convictions in order to get things done. On the other hand, Delilah won't go over any of her core principals, and tries holding Baltazar from doing so as well. They would fit the MBTI personality types as INFP (Delilah) and an intense and unbalanced ENTJ (Baltazar).
Baltazar's obsession with control ends up making him gaslight Delilah, and it only gets worse overtime. She's, unfortunately, emotionally tied up to him, and has hope she can still fix the relationship. But is there something to fix?
It's been super hard to write them because emotionally toxic relationships aren't that apparent. They're always hidden, masked as something else, and thats also why it's so hard to find a palpable reason to leave your toxic partner. I do a better job writing the obvious, that's why I need a whole lot more experience to make justice to this.
I'd love to hear your thoughts!
Thank you all so much, and I hope you have a great day!
Comments
Eh, relationship fights are soo common, makes me kinda glad I'm not in one. But as far as advice I can't really say, cause I just have the hints from your artworks to go by and sometimes it seems like Baltazar is a side hero/anti-hero and sometimes the main villain, so it's hard to tell not knowing more about him, or whether Del is meant to be with Steban or Balty. I always assumed Baltazar is the reason Steban had to leave everyone. Hehe. These characters are great though, having Baltazar be a big part of the story is a wise choice, his design and what I know of his personality is interesting and suspenseful.
Lombarsi
2019-01-16 15:33:12 +0000 UTC
