Secret Technique
Added 2021-10-30 14:50:25 +0000 UTCFollow-up to All Done.
Originally, I meant to have both as a single piece, but May wasn't kind on me. Which explains why it ended a bit abruptly back then, and also the reason I still haven't posted All Done outside of here yet. Unless you include leaks, of course.
... this took the better part of the month to create.
Hopefully this is worth it. I have something fun in mind for the next part.
Remember, I'm still open to suggestions.
Feel free to post ideas here, or in the preview poll.
Comments
Now that's what I like to hear
YngStmr
2021-11-06 16:49:01 +0000 UTCThank you. The next part will be much naughtier.
Renzuki Harai
2021-11-05 23:47:46 +0000 UTCWow, the surprises come a mile a minute in this one! I’m glad to see another “technique” used in a sexy way. Good details: Ayane still moving in the background when Kasumi stands, the way Kasumi’s stockings dig into her thighs a little, Kasumi’s facial expressions, the text. Nice cut from Ayane to Kasumi getting pounded again. Very curious to see the next part!
YngStmr
2021-11-05 21:38:26 +0000 UTCAlong with the lesbian concept, I had an idea. Since Kasumi was so slow and ditsy at first with helping Ayane get out of anal situation, maybe Ayane could punish her with anal using a strap-on? Maybe while she's getting banged by Ryu or Momoji even? ^^ Ayane would definitely be like, "This is for making me wait." xD Maybe Momiji could take Kasumi away from Ryu after giving the strap-on to Ayane and then Ryu's left watching the 3 of them go at it, which is enough to (temporarily at least?) keep him at bay. lol, this is fun. xD
Maikeru
2021-11-02 13:48:45 +0000 UTCVery good points. Don't worry about criticizing, I welcome it. Regarding waste, this was mostly used as humor, I don't see myself featuring it in a more pronounced manner, except in very specific situations. Also, I draw the line at pee. You won't see any other kind of waste in my work, if that's the worry. About having little action, my idea was to use this as transition into something bigger. I'd like the next part to focus heavily on sex, and I intend to make it much busier than Out of Control, except this time Momiji would be front and center. I just needed to introduce her proper. But if you feel Kasumi deserves a bit more, I'll see about involving her more as well. Feel free to suggest what you have in mind.
Renzuki Harai
2021-10-30 20:59:55 +0000 UTCHate to criticize any of Renzuki's work but... I'm really not a fan of stuff that involve human waste, and despite this being the longest piece done by Renzuki it seems to have so little action. Having said this, I believe this is a very nice sketch for the giggles, and I like the idea of Momiji being added to the series. I hope that Ryu would at least finish what he started with Kasumi in the next episode :)
HatefulTruth
2021-10-30 19:00:04 +0000 UTCMaybe she can call her all friends of DOA to help …plz
Venson Chen
2021-10-30 17:25:53 +0000 UTCNevermind, just watched it and looks like Momiji has already shown up 😆
Wheeler Schmidt
2021-10-30 16:06:12 +0000 UTCHey Mr Renzuki, as always outstanding work. I was thinking maybe at some point in one of these little story episodes, maybe Momiji could walk in or somehow become apart of this? Since she's in Ninja Gaiden and lives in Busa's village. Just a suggestion/thought tho. Whatever you decide, it'll be good! Thanks again 😃
Wheeler Schmidt
2021-10-30 16:03:16 +0000 UTC(use of a translator) It's always good. Any plans to add sound?
Daniel Song
2021-10-30 15:05:42 +0000 UTCWould love to see what you have in store next! Thanks for keeping it up :D
Shoda Lyons
2021-10-30 14:54:19 +0000 UTC
