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Heat of the Moment Page 9

Yeah I...sorta thought today was Saturday.

Heat of the Moment Page 9

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Clawjob?

sheq2

Yeah you make a good point, I was going for the idea of the top panel is itself then the vertical slices go top to bottom left then top to bottom right. I can see how that's kinda wonky For future pages, ill try to make the panels flow more logically.

TJPones

The panel flow seems a bit off - it appears vertical first, then horizontal is the intended order, but the eye tends to go horizontal first, then vertical. I had to read it a couple of times. The dialogue in panel 1 has the same issue. The art is great though!

Andrew Pam


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