Heat of the Moment Page 9
Added 2022-05-29 23:34:39 +0000 UTCYeah I...sorta thought today was Saturday.
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Clawjob?
sheq2
2022-05-31 04:59:40 +0000 UTCYeah you make a good point, I was going for the idea of the top panel is itself then the vertical slices go top to bottom left then top to bottom right. I can see how that's kinda wonky For future pages, ill try to make the panels flow more logically.
TJPones
2022-05-30 00:40:15 +0000 UTCThe panel flow seems a bit off - it appears vertical first, then horizontal is the intended order, but the eye tends to go horizontal first, then vertical. I had to read it a couple of times. The dialogue in panel 1 has the same issue. The art is great though!
Andrew Pam
2022-05-30 00:35:38 +0000 UTC
