Punching…
Added 2022-12-28 17:30:39 +0000 UTCDarn… I woke up this morning and really want to have Reggie punch Ethel. Not because I want to see Ethel hit up but it amplifies what a jerk Reggie is and makes the reader really feel sorry for poor Ethel.
Okay. Apologies in advance if you feel it goes too far but it has a great payoff in the Betty/Ethel scene.
After I’m done, if people want me to change it, I can always just have Reggie twisting her arm which works with the story as well, but not as shocking.
Comments
Sorry, hit enter too soon - hint: wonder what kind of punch Jughead could throw?
HankD
2022-12-28 18:06:28 +0000 UTCIf it just makes the payback sweeter, pour it on like Honey.
HankD
2022-12-28 18:02:46 +0000 UTCJust go for it. Audiences need reasons to hate villains.
Don Sanders
2022-12-28 17:35:20 +0000 UTCIf the payoff is hot, sure. I just don’t like violence for the sake of it. One thing is manhandling and ragdolling, but if it is not consensual…it’s weird.
Tinhy
2022-12-28 17:34:47 +0000 UTC![개성인쥬스[pingkypen]](https://xaiju.com/istorage/106895.jpg)
