Rejected! Self Critique
Added 2022-02-15 15:04:19 +0000 UTCI'll just post these two Valentines drawings that I'm dumping because... well, mostly because I spent far too much time struggling with them. Although I like how her face and body turned out, the perspective is way off and her body is contorted in a very unappealing way. Caricature is way off.
This drawing went through about two hours of revisions and tweaking to the point it looks totally un-natural and totally stiff. The two of them do not even look like they are part of the same art and more of a composite of two different drawings.
Anyways, I know some of you will find some enjoyment out of this so I'll post it rather then dump it.
Comments
Could you recommend any changes to my commission?
Jamie Willis
2022-02-16 01:47:11 +0000 UTCIt doesn't look too bad. Maybe make the guy a little shorter or straighten up Lorna. Ditch the rope around the body. I hope this helps.
Brent Smith
2022-02-16 01:17:31 +0000 UTC:P. Little Lorna is devoid of social norms and so are the men in her world. In the world of Little Lorna men are only judged by girth and volume!
Julia Sinope
2022-02-15 17:34:56 +0000 UTCBetter then nothing, it actually looks great I think this looks a lot better then mine at the moment but I believe in your art style :)
Jamie Willis
2022-02-15 17:25:06 +0000 UTCSo, Lorna gladly couples with ugly, tubby studs, but resists the handsome, buff ones, eh? Maybe there's hope for me after all!!!
fannum
2022-02-15 17:14:40 +0000 UTC
