Here's the new final page!
I guess for continuity I couldn't have Dr. Hofferschornsteinfegermeister explode at the end however I think we're going to have to live with the unexplained reason why Little Lorna's head is no longer "detachable" going forward.
For the next comic, I've had multiple comments about allowing the line work to shine a little more so for the next comic I'm going to try and color it a little more flat (like an Archie Comic) but I'm going to add more detail tothe line work to show more form and volume. We'll see how that goes! The art is easier (ie. quicker) to do if I do not have to work so much shading it and if it is actually taking away from the art then I can probably scale down that step!
Enough of these repeats... Onwards to issue #2 at last!
Eddie Edwards
2020-02-24 04:32:20 +0000 UTChal
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