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Portal to Nova Roma: Paris - Chapter 29

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Funny, I actually had an entire section devoted to this in my first draft but ended up cutting it because it felt very redundant to his other doppelgangers. Basically having the mage essentially learn melee/fighting combat instead of focusing on his mage stuff. But I did like the idea, so you are right on with your thoughts!

J.R. Mathews

Holy shit I was so surprised to see the mage start using magic so efficiently that shit was so cool🙌🏾 man first lighting mastery is awesome I really hope Alexander revolutionises the magic system in a way that surpasses using skills I really liked how he utilised frost lightening mastery to just carpet bomb the pace xD. I’m hoping he figures out how to enforce his body with the skill What I imagine it doing: Enhances his body or weapon with the magic of choice. How it works: Instead of projecting his magic outward, he’d cycle it through his body to boost: • Strength • Speed • Durability • Reaction time And imagine how it’d look too and aura of ice and sparkling lightning

Hiro Shizuki

It's complicated. But to put it simply, I want to git rid of the corruption. So dump them in a doppelganger and kill it. What happened is not the way. I don't want the munk dead. I don't want to loose the assassin or munk class. But I don't see the munk as an individual and would not weep for his death. Also Isabella is in danger. Cold lightning is a good element to deal with that. This needs to be solved cold and fast. So the cliff hanger here is rather frustrating.

Michael Ferguson

This chapter has successfully turned my blood lust to anger. If that's what you were going for well done.

Michael Ferguson

I don't think Alex is human. Even if you could get a surrogate to carry a kid it wouldn't be Alex's. Alexander could just as easy design a kid and grow them in a tank womb. Why bother, he's not going to die. No reason to reproduce.

Michael Ferguson

So.. Just hypothetically.. if they separated an egg from Isabella while in her Human form would that revert into ghost form after the timer expires or stay as its separated and maintained by a differing magical energy? Just a thought xD

Anthony Brookes

Glad you enjoyed it!!! I hate the format of that website. I swear they purposefully make it hard to find the good stories, but when you do find one it's amazing.

J.R. Mathews

I bet you’re spot on with the difficulty thing. He is going to strong arm the guild into giving him a contract on the King of Paris then instantly level the class to level 40 or something.

Aidan

You know what, I think you are faking us out. Alex is too much of a chad to let his lady love exist as a disembodied soul forever and he loves puzzles. Plus he’s a virgin and if that ever changes on one of their dates that’s just more motivation haha… wait could she have a ghost kid if they do? Hmmm

Aidan

Wanted to let you know that I was cackling cheering for the barbarians at the gate in Legends Never Die considering I am a week removed from rereading the third book of this series haha. Awesome rec and I’m enjoying looking through this website which I didn’t know existed. I wish stuff was easier to search for but it is fun seeing the crazy stuff that people have come up with.

Aidan

Ok please be faking us out with this no kids tragic future together. He is an advanced AI with the collective knowledge of the human race. He already built himself several bodies even if he cheated with the class. Given enough time and effort I definitely think he can make Isabel a body. Make some nanites to grow one, take a necromancer class (not ideal for making a body unless he really develops it, but I bet it would help with transferring her spirit into one), or golemancy (he’s already got experience there and I bet there is a class for it). Probably possible through blood mage class as well or a possible upgrade to life mage or something. There’s also a magical universe out there he will be exploring at some point and I bet they have solutions as well.

Aidan

Twice dead. There better be an achievement for this. Dresden would be so proud!

Michael Ferguson

Harry Dresden would be so proud right now.

Aidan

Does the assassin class level based on the difficulty of an assignment? Or the money payed for it? It's weird that the class needs to be leveled on guild contracts.

Michael Ferguson

I hope this is the assassin guild. It'll be easier to take the guild if they don't need to fight a war with a guild of their own.

Michael Ferguson

I'm pretty sure he could regrow a heart with out regeneration. Or reattach a head. Nothing less than incinerating a body to nothing will kill Alex, and that probably wouldn't work on Prime.

Michael Ferguson

My opinion is that nanobots can resurrect any doppelganger. There only limit is food. That could have been overcome with only one body. But Alex can bring himself food now.

Michael Ferguson

I hope Monk is ok!

John H


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