Portal to Nova Roma: Paris - Chapter 16
Added 2026-02-10 18:07:17 +0000 UTCComments
Please tell me the French come back quick.
Michael Ferguson
2026-02-10 23:21:35 +0000 UTCHeck yeah!!! You nailed exactly what I was going for. :)
J.R. Mathews
2026-02-10 20:52:34 +0000 UTCThis is so well timed. I can picture the uncertainty building as the alliance fell in the previous chapter: a promise of blood, then a confusing retreat that's very well addressed by the side characters, and a power-up with new shiny armour before the reader's thirst for vengeance is satisfied. Very good.
Reno
2026-02-10 20:49:21 +0000 UTCSweet!!!!
J.R. Mathews
2026-02-10 20:27:48 +0000 UTCSuch a great beginning to the book. I'm hooked!!
Michael Clack
2026-02-10 20:24:03 +0000 UTCNikephoros always bringing the deep wisdom! ๐
J.R. Mathews
2026-02-10 20:16:12 +0000 UTCโwaiting around was the lifeblood of the legion!โ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ too funny. Mr mathews you cooked again these chapters are cliffhanger after cliffhanger and I love it
Hiro Shizuki
2026-02-10 20:04:14 +0000 UTCIt does feel right calling themselves Nova Roma. They still have Roma troops and tattoos. I'd love to see France waist troops on taking Rome.
Michael Ferguson
2026-02-10 18:58:56 +0000 UTCI feel like an oger. I want blood. Now I feel like the city is going to fall so fast barley anyone is going to die.
Michael Ferguson
2026-02-10 18:58:17 +0000 UTCI do hope he invades Rome to reclaim the eternal city
John
2026-02-10 18:48:14 +0000 UTCIs Alex ready to kill the Cesar?
Michael Ferguson
2026-02-10 18:44:21 +0000 UTCNew Rome is still a waste land. He should send a clone to deal with that.
Michael Ferguson
2026-02-10 18:40:06 +0000 UTCAwesome!!
J.R. Mathews
2026-02-10 18:36:58 +0000 UTCThese last 2 chapters have been absolutely fantastic and satisfying
bcd051
2026-02-10 18:36:20 +0000 UTCHaha, yes! Are we the bad guys???
J.R. Mathews
2026-02-10 18:32:43 +0000 UTCItโs weird when your rooting for an army of dark elves, ogres, dragons, lizard people, dwarven bombadiers, and legionaries led by a flying demon possessed A.I. cyborg๐
John
2026-02-10 18:31:32 +0000 UTCYeah!!! ๐ช๐ช๐ช
J.R. Mathews
2026-02-10 18:28:05 +0000 UTCNow we are cooking!
John
2026-02-10 18:24:52 +0000 UTCGlad you liked it!!! ๐๐๐
J.R. Mathews
2026-02-10 18:24:21 +0000 UTCThis is such a deliciously satisfying chapter!
Jennifer Anderson
2026-02-10 18:21:09 +0000 UTC
