Portal to Nova Roma: Paris - Chapter 13
Added 2026-02-07 18:20:28 +0000 UTCComments
Hmmm it would be nice for Alexander to get a water spirit soon right?๐
Corey S
2026-02-15 05:31:01 +0000 UTCThank you!!
J.R. Mathews
2026-02-12 06:07:42 +0000 UTCGreat Chap for the most part. The part where constants making Alex's arm sore is nonsensical. Even if he is the crafter his stats are Way beyond hers. She could try to tear his arm off and he basically wouldn't feel it right? Also sparing the pirates is just dumb. They have proven themselves to be rapest, murders, thieves, slavers and happy to do it. I get letting people learn and being murciful but there is also correcting flat out wrong thinking. That part of being a parent and teacher he not doing that well in this scene. sparing the pirates is stupid, unjust and a drain on resources. Being murciful is great in the right situations. In the story you havent given sufficient reason why they wouldn't execute all the pirates. It's out of place. With Constances up brining and what she been though with the pirates it's completely out of place for her to spare them, let alone Alex to let her spare them. Hes not that dumb....ANd the mind wipeing which the priates know about from previous books and are just hokny dory with. You've basically made them the worst thing a human can become.......Just my thinking
C Smith
2026-02-12 06:01:12 +0000 UTCI don't go into it in the story but historically that area is fairly challenging to navigate. Shifting tides and whirlpools + in this fictional world lots of monsters from the overrun countryside mean good feeding grounds for sea monsters as well.
J.R. Mathews
2026-02-08 18:36:56 +0000 UTCThank you! What are they going to do about the little bit of water between Sicily and mainland Italy? Couldn't the pirates just go around Sicily to get to Venice? Or maybe I forgot/missed something about who's defending that area...
Reno
2026-02-08 18:32:59 +0000 UTCIt's like shooting fish in a barrel. How is that not fun? Free xp
Michael Ferguson
2026-02-08 05:47:36 +0000 UTCI feel bad.
Michael Ferguson
2026-02-08 05:45:37 +0000 UTCHaha, thank you!!! My undergrad degree is in history but all the research for this series felt like it's own Ph.D program or something, I swear. ๐คฃ
J.R. Mathews
2026-02-07 20:56:26 +0000 UTCI canโt believe how well educated you are I find myself cross referencing our world map to see where are character currently are itโs such a cool reading experience
Hiro Shizuki
2026-02-07 20:50:10 +0000 UTC
