Portal to Nova Roma: Paris - Chapter 9
Added 2026-02-03 19:00:14 +0000 UTCComments
I posted the recaps here on Patreon a day or two before chapter one if that might help you. โค๏ธ
J.R. Mathews
2026-02-05 10:55:13 +0000 UTCI realised that the only character I remember is Constans.. I may need to go back to the previous books. It's been a while. ๐ Maybe when you do the recap, give a sentence or two for the supporting cast, where they met and what their role is now?
Reno
2026-02-05 02:56:48 +0000 UTCI was feeling worry about friendly fire. Monsters are weird, and so are skills. The inconsistency doesn't bother me much.
Michael Ferguson
2026-02-04 03:07:37 +0000 UTCSome feedback on this chap. So the Scatter Shot can't penetrate the orgers, but it completly eversated the MC when he has hundreds of stats and was as large as a giant during the battle, barbarians at the gates. Seems terribly inconsistant. Also the cannons could bring down that elder dragon its hard to believe an orger could survive a single cannon shot stright on. Maybe the leader could take one and end up completely crippled, again seems really inconsastant. Also it seems you have the Tlihi surrounding the orges from behind, the goblins popping up in the middle of the battle field with the legion still firing rifles and cannons into the battle filed. You are absolutely going to be killing your own people fighting like that. Either the writing doesn't portray what you want with this scene or the MC doesn't care about his troops dieing from friendly fire. Good start with everything else so far.
C Smith
2026-02-04 02:30:52 +0000 UTC๐ช๐ช๐ช
J.R. Mathews
2026-02-03 23:56:08 +0000 UTCThe Primus moves with the advent of Spring... Paris better Tremble.
Anthony Brookes
2026-02-03 23:55:03 +0000 UTCโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
J.R. Mathews
2026-02-03 19:36:09 +0000 UTCThanks for another great chapter!
Michael Ferguson
2026-02-03 19:35:06 +0000 UTCI wondered why the wars were not bigger news at the school. Prime is taming the wilds.
Michael Ferguson
2026-02-03 19:34:52 +0000 UTC
