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It was the wind (Part 8) - Sketch Script

Rough sketch storyboard comic script of the next L&M update C:

As always,  the sketch and dialogue lines can still be edited or changed during the working process.




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It was the wind (Part 8) - Sketch Script

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It hits the roof top, which cause a hole there, I had a joke line for Seth something like "I've been wanting a skylight view" but, thought might be a bit forcing it, since the woman's still around 🤣(maybe next time) and yes the Windows are also broken from the impact. And there's one part left to wrap it up 😆

Jin

And made it seem natural too, like a true ninja 🤣

Jin

The sketch doesn't shows well what happens at the explosion, does it breaks a window? Kind of wonder what changes for Sara now...

Mythkaz

Makes cool exit, avoid cleaning. Smort

Rieza


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