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Added 2024-06-29 17:25:04 +0000 UTCAlright here it is... so far.
Sorry if you guys were expecting more on the first month. Honestly I got stuck for quite a bit because I was too indecisive about what coloring style I wanted. I'm also trying to avoid rushing this so I'm taking my time with each pages and try to have as much fun as I can in the process. I feel this just leads to a much better result in the end.
That said, with the groundwork set, I'm expecting a much smoother progress going forward. Gonna have more pages done in the next one, working on the 4th page right away.
So going into this, I wanted to avoid exposition dumping and try to get a bit of the "action" on display. A little tease of the main course I guess to get the reader's attention. And yeah, as you may have noticed, I changed a bit of Max's character. Also, Tatiana is the one narrating the story. Let me know what you guys think so far.
Comments
Hey it's cool :) I appreciate you leaving your thoughts so thank you very much!
Heath Grace
2024-07-02 03:51:04 +0000 UTCI think this is a great start, I'm not great at making comments but I just like seeing the next development for those two
andy mandy
2024-06-30 15:18:02 +0000 UTCYou really delivered a nice hook with the story. A great way to make the audience guess how Max and Tatiana even got together in the first place if they are going to do it in an empty classroom. Btw nice choice too. It makes it very risky of them to do it ^^
YamiZero
2024-06-30 13:51:09 +0000 UTCI can't tell you what Max's voice sounds like at the moment. As for Tatiana, I imagine it to sound like Laura Bailey's
Heath Grace
2024-06-30 11:42:29 +0000 UTCWhat would Tatiana and Max voices sound like? I would like to know how there voices would sound so I could feel like they are telling me there story.
Jacob
2024-06-30 07:56:22 +0000 UTCThank you ^^
Heath Grace
2024-06-30 05:21:15 +0000 UTCGlorious work, Tatiana looks gorgeous as usual
Ivan Doe
2024-06-30 03:35:35 +0000 UTCYou're welcome!! I will continue subscribed to wait for more pages. Good luck!! :)
Daemon Dilan
2024-06-30 03:34:26 +0000 UTCI'm very much the same. Thank you ^^
Heath Grace
2024-06-30 03:24:33 +0000 UTCThank you very much! Def a rollercoaster ahead, I hope you all enjoy it ^^
Heath Grace
2024-06-30 03:23:15 +0000 UTCYeah 100 percent my fault. I'm sorry again for making you guys wait for so long. I'll do my best with the rest of the pages. Thank you for the patience and support this whole time, I really appreciate it :')
Heath Grace
2024-06-30 03:20:45 +0000 UTCAwesome! :D
Heath Grace
2024-06-30 03:16:30 +0000 UTCSweet! Thank you very much! ^^
Heath Grace
2024-06-30 03:16:18 +0000 UTCAw thanks man ^^
Heath Grace
2024-06-30 03:15:26 +0000 UTCThanks dude!
Heath Grace
2024-06-30 03:14:49 +0000 UTCXD
Heath Grace
2024-06-30 03:14:39 +0000 UTCJust some tiny details like shorter bangs and sharper irises. And of course as Violet says. It's also possible that I may change a certain aspect of his character that may be substantial. I'm not 100% committed to the idea yet so I'm not ready to tell... maybe in the next few pages...
Heath Grace
2024-06-30 03:13:52 +0000 UTCWow dude this is amazing
ah_hw
2024-06-30 02:14:08 +0000 UTCCan’t wait to see those tits on full display
Fiqures
2024-06-30 01:48:50 +0000 UTCi have yet to see this man miss, everything he posts is supreme 😩
rescopan
2024-06-30 00:52:30 +0000 UTCclassic max having to make up for missing penis inspection day
e2m8
2024-06-30 00:34:28 +0000 UTCGood start to the story. No exposition.
Violet Rose in The Dark
2024-06-30 00:30:58 +0000 UTCNo arm sleeves.
Violet Rose in The Dark
2024-06-30 00:30:43 +0000 UTCWhat did you change about Max? I can’t seem to figure it out.
Seth Blackburn
2024-06-29 21:15:11 +0000 UTCBro cocked
HydraXs
2024-06-29 20:25:44 +0000 UTCThis is really good.
Alex Stephens
2024-06-29 19:11:18 +0000 UTCnah sis a freak
Xander Deebee
2024-06-29 18:00:23 +0000 UTCSLOPPY THROAT GOAT YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Kodiak
2024-06-29 17:58:30 +0000 UTCamazing!!
Promethia
2024-06-29 17:55:13 +0000 UTCOh good good, I love the opening but what I'm REALLY looking forward to is seeing them establish this relationship and how they start!
Queertzalcoatl
2024-06-29 17:50:34 +0000 UTCFinally!!! After several months of waiting, it was worth it!! It's so good!! 👍👍
Daemon Dilan
2024-06-29 17:46:27 +0000 UTCa very good start :^
Sadchild
2024-06-29 17:45:36 +0000 UTCNow this is a great way to start a comic. Looking forward to more
Runus Brewblade
2024-06-29 17:44:15 +0000 UTCThis is a perfect start to the story. And yeah, you def caught my attention XD
FURIOUS
2024-06-29 17:29:46 +0000 UTC
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