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๐Ÿ‡บ๐Ÿ‡ธ English:

Hey everyone! ๐Ÿ–ค Since the end of January, Iโ€™ve changed my art style, and Iโ€™d love to hear your thoughts! Please rate my content so far from 1 to 5 โญ and let me know in the comments what you think. Your feedback means a lot to me! ๐Ÿ’•

๐Ÿ‡ฏ๐Ÿ‡ต ๆ—ฅๆœฌ่ชž:

ใฟใ‚“ใชใ€ใ“ใ‚“ใซใกใฏ๏ผ๐Ÿ–ค 1ๆœˆๆœซใ‹ใ‚‰ใ‚ขใƒผใƒˆใ‚นใ‚ฟใ‚คใƒซใ‚’ๅค‰ๆ›ดใ—ใพใ—ใŸใŒใ€็š†ใ•ใ‚“ใฎๆ„Ÿๆƒณใ‚’่žใใŸใ„ใงใ™๏ผ1ใ€œ5 โญ ใง่ฉ•ไพกใ—ใฆใ€ใ‚ณใƒกใƒณใƒˆใงๆ„่ฆ‹ใ‚’่žใ‹ใ›ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚็š†ใ•ใ‚“ใฎใƒ•ใ‚ฃใƒผใƒ‰ใƒใƒƒใ‚ฏใŒใจใฆใ‚‚ๅคงๅˆ‡ใงใ™๏ผ๐Ÿ’•

๐Ÿ‡จ๐Ÿ‡ณ ไธญๆ–‡:

ๅคงๅฎถๅฅฝ๏ผ๐Ÿ–ค ไปŽ 1 ๆœˆๅบ•ๅผ€ๅง‹๏ผŒๆˆ‘ๆ›ดๆ”นไบ†็ป˜็”ป้ฃŽๆ ผ๏ผŒๆƒณๅฌๅฌไฝ ไปฌ็š„ๆƒณๆณ•๏ผ่ฏท็ป™ๆˆ‘ 1-5 โญ ็š„่ฏ„ๅˆ†๏ผŒๅนถๅœจ่ฏ„่ฎบๅŒบๅ‘Š่ฏ‰ๆˆ‘ไฝ ็š„ๆ„Ÿๅ—ใ€‚ไฝ ไปฌ็š„ๅ้ฆˆๅฏนๆˆ‘้žๅธธ้‡่ฆ๏ผ๐Ÿ’•

๐Ÿ‡ฐ๐Ÿ‡ท ํ•œ๊ตญ์–ด:

์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„, ์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”! ๐Ÿ–ค 1์›” ๋ง๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๊ทธ๋ฆผ ์Šคํƒ€์ผ์„ ๋ณ€๊ฒฝํ–ˆ์–ด์š”! ์ง€๊ธˆ๊นŒ์ง€์˜ ์ž‘์—…์„ 1~5 โญ๋กœ ํ‰๊ฐ€ํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹œ๊ณ , ๋Œ“๊ธ€๋กœ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ๋‚จ๊ฒจ ์ฃผ์„ธ์š”. ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์ด ์ €์—๊ฒŒ ์ •๋ง ์ค‘์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ๐Ÿ’•

 

 

Comments

Thank you, Iโ€™m planning to do that in the future, but iโ€™m quite bad ad writing dialogues lol

Ludy Winterhowl

5. Nice and unique artwork. May I suggest you could add some flavor text or captions like telling the girl the guy how she feels and wants some action. It adds some excitement when viewing the image set.

RMarco21

love the storytelling in the sets, makes it nicer than a random assortment. but MORE YURI! yuri takeover

Arci2

I really like the style and how the images are like stories.

ScootyPuffJr

4, That to be hornest overall. But still very decent

Harvey


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