T.P.H - Chapter 44
Added 2025-12-02 15:10:18 +0000 UTCContinuing the non-canon chapter, Jay is having a lot of fun messing with the girls' minds, and having these four women very much willing to let him change them and try out whatever crazy ideas he has, it should amount to a very sexy and interesting mini-series. Making this chapter non-canon was a really good move. While I believe everyone is mostly acting in character, this allows me to not have to worry about every little detail, and this makes the process less stressful, which is exactly what I wanted to achieve. PS: Spoilers for the chapter ahead: By the way, near the end of the chapter, you may notice that after Kyla was brainwashed into a cute cat girl character, her pupils changed a bit, and she also starts showing very little fangs. She didn't actually transform her body for real. I was just trying to depict her mind alterations and show it visually a little bit, similar to how I sometimes add spiral eyes on the characters, but this doesn't mean they actually have spirals, it's just a visual trick as a way to depict how she's changing her way of acting. But I'd like to know what you all think of that, do you think these minor alterations are ok, would you like more of it, or do you think it's a bit confusing? Your answer will help me with future chapters.
Comments
Pretty much my thoughts, but as long as you guys like it and get used to it then I think it will be a good thing to start doing since it's cute!
RollB
2025-12-02 16:53:03 +0000 UTCMinor changes are cute, though sometimes it might get confusing since you would only know it's a visual trick if you read the chapter descriptions.
Adyen
2025-12-02 15:31:17 +0000 UTC
