I would like for him to learn all types of chakra release
Slicktrick
2025-07-12 12:41:59 +0000 UTC
Genuinely, the reveal about Kurama shocked me. I was expecting many things, but not that. That really took me for a loop and I enjoyed every second of it. Can’t wait for the future. I think it would be great if Kakashi teaches Naruto more lightning based jutsus. Naruto can definitely go on and modify Chidori to his own liking and would give him moves. Maybe if he understands lightning release he would be able to modify his lightning spear, coming up with new moves combining lightning chakra and soul energy. Thanks for the coaster
Natural
2025-06-19 16:32:43 +0000 UTC
No, sorry man but my brother is actually an inspiring animator and he wanted to his first animation story based on my fanfic.
Muhammad Hasnain
2025-06-17 05:10:53 +0000 UTC
Mrs. Adamo can I publish your work on my YouTube channel
Just to inform my YouTube channel it’s call Juxplay-fanfic
Juan Mancilla
2025-06-17 05:09:10 +0000 UTC
It feels like that “hormonal teenager” bit with the binocs is out of place.
They two could just watch the dance, you don’t need to muddy the waters as to his perception of Jiraya with hypocricy.
Also, I think naruto should learn lightning, but only one or two lightning jutsu (and not chidori), if only because I feel like lightning chakra and miracle lightning may actually work together well, unlike chaos/soul sorcery and chakra.
Nicholas
2025-06-16 12:21:45 +0000 UTC
I think keep his chakra to wind and fire and lightning be dark souls based.
Also something I’d like to see is Naruto creating weapons for specific problems and enemies. In dark souls you are encouraged to use different items to exploit weakness and it would be cool to see Naruto channel that
GoT779
2025-06-16 02:05:41 +0000 UTC
I can't wait for the next one I hope it comes soon but I also hope that when hinata returns to the hyuga family and reports what happened she shuts up the elders and explains how her eyes evolved because of the eye tonic naruto gave her and Sasuke but also the hokage finds out orchimaru gave out the information about naruto's parents and send out guy's team and asuma to get them back safely when naruto returns he explains to the hokage and team 7 and 8 about how he came by and got the seal for lorderan and explains everything he went through in there but without the dying.
Noctis123
2025-06-16 00:04:26 +0000 UTC
I, for one, look forward to a Naruto-Kurama friendship that’s not centered on the fact that the latter is not stuck in the former’s belly.
Also, since the seal is gone I guess we aren’t getting a reunion between fishcake and his parents (at least in the canon form). Shame, I’d love to see Kushina’s perspective on her son becoming an undying badass.
MehOhWell
2025-06-15 23:21:19 +0000 UTC
I think kakashi should teach naruto lightning release.
Zukuto Yuki
2025-06-15 20:43:39 +0000 UTC
lol Kiba really hit the "A person who thinks all the time has nothing to think about except thoughts.". next thing you know hell realise that „real eyes realise real lies“. on a serious note I like how you handled jirayia. japan has a serious issue with casual sexual assault and it’s reflected in anime. the shit that old man pulled was never just a fun character quirk but a serious problem. and his victims couldn’t even do shit because hes both powerful personally and plotically. naruto as a knight who fights for women and the innocent should absolutely NOT get along with him as long as he dosent change in a serious way. him being a great shinobi in no way makes up for being a sex offender.
If theres one thing id critisise tho then its how that poor girl hinata is being led on. just by the fact naruto is an everlasting dragon, meaning hell be immortal and like 18ft tall eventually, will make a real relationship between them impossible. its just not going to happen. theyre fundamentally so different that their relationship could never be one between equals. I think hinata deserves better than that.
caeven
2025-06-15 19:30:06 +0000 UTC
It's completely awesome
Axwl
2025-06-15 19:27:40 +0000 UTC
........ What?
I think you're the first to kick away Kurama from Naruto in a Naruto fanfic with Naruto as MC. I never though of this possible.
Damn good chapter.
Vick
2025-06-15 19:27:08 +0000 UTC
Roughly around the same height.
Muhammad Hasnain
2025-06-15 19:15:19 +0000 UTC
Oooh crap, I forgot when a jinchuriki dies, the bijuu gets released, that mean kurama is in lodran, so question, which is biggest Naruto dragon form or kurama himself