Chapter no.81 Lower Undead Burg
Added 2025-03-28 00:13:56 +0000 UTCNaruto moved through the forest with a spring i
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You should edit the start, the market fire never happened Edit: After reading the whole thing, I think I prefere the edited one in scribblehub. Naruto broke down and let everything go, and don't shout at Oscar (even hurt, it's a bit too much for him but that my opinion). I prefere the way he grief overthere rather than rampage here. Also, the merchand waiting just fro Naruto to die is a bit too much, I found the way he found him dead, take his sword and go take revenge better. Also, I will stop being a annoyance since I caught up with Scribblehub and will keep from only here
Vick
2025-06-10 22:26:42 +0000 UTCSaw that hogwarts and fate references you made there
Reviv3pls
2025-05-05 10:26:35 +0000 UTCThe I-frames!!! The I-frames are real!!! An interesting idea occurred to me and the more I think about it the better it sounds. Sage mode, nature energy. Laurentius, the lad himself, explained the to be a pyromancer is to be in tune with nature. Pyro sage mode?
Sawyer Newton
2025-03-29 06:01:18 +0000 UTCReading Naruto’s talk with the merchant made me gain a sad smile. It was emotional and I like how you didn’t make it purely a victim. The guy did bad stuff, but he was also dealt a bad hand. I like how in Lordran you make it so not everything is black and white. Adding more lore to each character even side characters makes the story more entertaining and leaves readers like me asking more questions and thus coming back for me. I enjoyed this chapter greatly. Don’t know why but the description of Naruto holding both is swords was badass. You were right with Grigg as well. With his dialogue in this chapter I did start to think there was more to him and I like the theory of what his intentions were. I’m excited for the next chapters, and the eventual talk or even fight with Kakashi. Same for his eventual fight with Zabuza. As for the next chapter, since it’s called power of the dragons I want to assume that’s when Naruto will gain some kind of power related to dragons. He has the drake sword, so maybe he gains another weapon or skill related to dragons. One thing I’m curious is how Kurama will fit in this fanfic. Kurama can have a vague understanding of what Naruto experiences so I wonder if he knows about Lordran. And the wave arc is the first time Naruto taps in Kurama’s chakra, so I’m curious if he will in the final fight. Can’t wait for the next.
Natural
2025-03-29 00:39:40 +0000 UTCFinally, a chance at understanding and discussion!
Kurotanbo
2025-03-28 19:49:50 +0000 UTCI've never played Dark Souls, but I love how you are turning small details into a full blown character with a purpose. Loved the fight scene, could picture the fight clearly in my head, love the details. I enjoyed the way you haven't outright stated if Naruto can trust Grigg or not yet. He's got that talk-no-jutsu he's famously used to flip people. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Epwydadlan
2025-03-28 15:20:46 +0000 UTCWell, let's say I have big plans for Priscilla.
Muhammad Hasnain
2025-03-28 10:51:46 +0000 UTCIn a couple of chapters.
Muhammad Hasnain
2025-03-28 10:51:00 +0000 UTCLove this book but I gotta ask when is he gonna get his arm back?
Reviv3pls
2025-03-28 10:50:08 +0000 UTCLove this. Thnx for the chapter
Adam Sheppard
2025-03-28 09:00:43 +0000 UTCOh my god it’s so damn good
Carfmodyios
2025-03-28 06:45:30 +0000 UTCWith everything that's been happening, I have to wonder. What is going to happen when Naruto meets Priscilla? Is he going to try to get her out of the painting? Is he going to kill her, however unlikely? Especially with this dragon thing you mentioned. Is he going to try to get her out of Lordran like he did with his lizard Oscar? So many questions about his interactions with all the characters he's yet to meet.
Ramon Diaz
2025-03-28 03:04:49 +0000 UTCThanks so much for the chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
Thane Patterson
2025-03-28 02:04:17 +0000 UTCGood stuff. You do a great job at bringing minor characters to life and adding them to the story in a meaningful way.
Marcus serpa
2025-03-28 00:40:36 +0000 UTC
