Page 10, aw yeah
Added 2015-02-18 21:07:21 +0000 UTCHello everyone, another page is up, go have a look! http://shiincomics.tumblr.com/ (password related post for new patrons; http://www.patreon.com/creation?hid=1066513 ) Stay awesome gents /shiin
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It's probably true, as Ace pointed out they often talk and thinks like that. But I will keep it in mind, try to get some variation in if I can remember, thanks! : )
Shiin
2015-02-19 13:32:47 +0000 UTCHehe I guess that is a good word to use to describe it :D Thank you!
Shiin
2015-02-19 13:31:29 +0000 UTCThanks, and he is indeed ^^ No I don't the great finish will be quite yet, but we are geting there : )
Shiin
2015-02-19 13:31:04 +0000 UTCI kindly disagree on this one, even this page not have any wide open mouths, only clenched teeth. Be aware that most of the time the characters are either talking or moaning, and a closed mouth would looks strange (except if they are into ventriloquism ^^). As you say he can try to vary, but I not think is an issue or even that common.^^
Ace
2015-02-19 08:42:43 +0000 UTCOne small issue with your work that a friend pointed out to me was that you tend towards having people's mouths opened wide all the time. It's not too big of an issue but it may help if you try to vary it from time to time.
Dantels
2015-02-19 04:48:29 +0000 UTCIntense is how I would difine this one, the first two panels are pretty sexy but the third one is the showstealer, amazingly done, thanks for that. ^^
Ace
2015-02-18 21:11:06 +0000 UTCGreat action, Naruto's a lucky man to be fucking that body :D I do hope they're not going for the big finish just yet though :)
Smutfan
2015-02-18 21:09:29 +0000 UTC
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