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Raven's pt 3 - Girls Night out

This will be the beginning of Raven's 'adventure' with Blackfire. So the FF (and F) bit will only stay for some pages before they move to somewhere... more diverse.

(I realized that I overused this pattern, I will avoid using it again in the future)

For this part of Raven's story, I'm going to use a more traditional comic book format since I have realized how limiting a one-page + text exposition format is. Adding more panels is always a better way to spice things up, naturally.

And on another note, originally I wanted to directly involve Starfire in this story, then I realized it would give Patreon a reason to take this down because it will technically be a -cough- close-relatives kind of thing -cough-. Even though they are not doing something to each other, still... I just don't want to risk it.

She will be present though, in a way.

Next week:

 I'm finishing the last 2 pages of Chun-Li's. After that, I will be focusing on this series for the rest of the month, so hopefully, we will have 3-4 pages by the end of the month. That way we can proceed with the main story next month!

Also, if you have ideas or feedback, please feel free to reach me out in the comment section or via direct message!

Raven's pt 3 - Girls Night out

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Btw really like this one =)

SumDude

Now that Raven seems to have accepted her place. It only seems natural that she would prefer to keep some mark of ownership on her at all times. Lest her mistress punish her...

SumDude


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