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Help me out, Legionnaires! I’ve been going back and forth on panel 2 for my up comic remake of my old JennyCave comic. Version one is closer to the original. Version two is a bit of a revision, which may match the dialogue better. Which do you like?

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I say version 1 because it really shows her struggle and feels more dramatic

She Hulk Fan

They eyes are actually already underway when the comic starts. Buck notices which prompts Jen's reaction in this panel and the next.

SAS_Art

Version 2, ESPECIALLY if her eyes reveal that the TF has started!

Todd Carney


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