Feedback requested
Added 2020-05-03 13:11:42 +0000 UTCHelp me out, Legionnaires! I’ve been going back and forth on panel 2 for my up comic remake of my old JennyCave comic. Version one is closer to the original. Version two is a bit of a revision, which may match the dialogue better. Which do you like?
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I say version 1 because it really shows her struggle and feels more dramatic
She Hulk Fan
2020-05-06 06:29:02 +0000 UTCThey eyes are actually already underway when the comic starts. Buck notices which prompts Jen's reaction in this panel and the next.
SAS_Art
2020-05-03 22:46:21 +0000 UTCVersion 2, ESPECIALLY if her eyes reveal that the TF has started!
Todd Carney
2020-05-03 19:14:20 +0000 UTC
